Pat Dring Poet Rhyme

Hello

HELLO


Hello, can I speak to Pat the lady said

That’s me, Congratulations Pat, You have won a holiday to the Med.

Then she started quoting prices for this and that.

Telling me, just how lucky you are Pat.

After a couple of minutes it dawned on me.

Shouldn’t my so called prize be actually  free.

More facts and figures she carried on quoting
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I said to her you must be joking.

I can’t possibly afford the holiday I am supposed to have won
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I’ll just go back to Skegness and have some fun.

So remember If you get a call to say you have won,

 A holiday it may not be free,

Its  probably some sort of time share like she tried to sell me.

But just for a second, I thought all my dreams had come true
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I was off to the Med with nothing to do

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Richard Palmer June 5, 2014 at 4:14 PM be careful its a scam one of my friends lost a lot of money buying into a vacation like that,warning message done in poetry,great write Pat

Toquyen Harrell May 25, 2014 at 6:35 PM Haha, dash that vacation! How dare they for working us up, lol? Nice write, Pat. Hope you have nothing to do without going on vacation. Dream on, right?