Hello

I say hello to everyone, I do,
a friend, complete strangers, they're all the same,
one word is all it takes, no matter who,
so simple, and does not require a name.
Most folk return the word wrapped in a smile,
or maybe just a nod, that will suffice,
the lonely, with no contact for a while
are glad that somebody has broke the ice.
But there are some wrapped tight within their zone,
uneasy with incursions on their space,
a reticence that shows itself in stone
upon a passing bleak and lonely face.
'Hello' ,the chain's first link, give it a go,
as every treasured friendship started so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Murray Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 6:40 PM
"Hello" again.
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 9:05 PM
this is just wonderful and the meter and message, everything. Viv, I have not forgotten what you asked. I hope I am not too late. soupmail.
Sergi Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 12:39 PM
If you leave a hello and a smile with a friend or a stranger, it is not forgotten Great friendly poem, Viv!
Cornish Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 1:37 PM
If the world was full of "viv"acious souls like yours it would surely be a kinder place. Fine thoughts cleverly sonnet wrapped.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Everyone can use a friendly hello. Your sonnet with your special message shines Viv! I say Aloha here. : )
Godwin Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Hello. I probably talk too much to strangers, but I'm with you - a smile and a hi mean so much. I also like smiling at miserable people. This is clever and cute, but also profound in its message. Enjoyed! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 12:02 AM
Hi Viv, anyone with a hat like that is a friendly person, so I knew this all along!!! :)
Laurie Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 5:49 PM
G'day Viv … it's a great habit to get into Viv. Cost is nothing but the reward can be great - thanks again Viv - Lindsay
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Very nice Viv! :)
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Wonderful sentiments you expressed in this poem, Viv. The ending line says it all..excellent thoughts.
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