Hellenic - 2022

A cop on the Doughnut Diet
Persuaded his wife to try it
As if it were fate
They both ate and ate
Because they loved grease and fry it
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Lawrence Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Rico, Imagery abounds !! Maybe a new painting series lol ! Hugs to you my friend, Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:32 AM
May the "Ice Diamonds" slopes live up to your hopes! Congratulations on your "Mind Dance" poem achieving in excess of 1,000-views! Well done, indeed!
Laurie Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Hello Rico ... couldn't think of a worse addiction. They'll have to widen the doors - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:33 AM
I really do not understand the attraction, but the modern generation sure love to eat sugar! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 8:36 AM
And now Mr a Mrs roly poly lol
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:34 AM
They are American, so their funds will soon shift to the medical profession . . . .
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:42 PM
lol thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:13 PM
brought a grin to my face, rico!
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Next for a laugh! Aloha!
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