Hell Your New Home

Your words and actions
lashing out at everyone
fire~smoke everywhere


Do you love the heat
hell could be your great hot spot
new home made for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lane Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:01 PM
I get a great sense of anger. Well written, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, anger with hurt and frustration. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 4:49 PM
I like how you did this, Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Hell write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Y. Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Hi Paula, Good take on the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day-Alexis
Goldsmith Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Hell write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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