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Hell Your New Home

Your words and actions lashing out at everyone fire~smoke everywhere Do you love the heat hell could be your great hot spot new home made for you

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Lin Lane

Date: 5/1/2023 4:01:00 PM

I get a great sense of anger. Well written, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/3/2023 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, anger with hurt and frustration. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2023 4:49:00 PM

I like how you did this, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2023 8:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Hell write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2023 9:32:00 AM

Hi Paula, Good take on the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day-Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/27/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Hell write. Have a blessed day writing away....................