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- Hell Is Open -

An inferno of thoughts and chaos
            No one sees that the smile does not reach the eyes
            A fortress built by betrayal
            When the words are pronounced,
            they can no longer be withdrawn
            A devilish and poisonous voice sings to me
            the influence of the words is decisive
            Impossible to fight this dark force
            In his presence
            a putrefaction, stench, fire and dark smoke
            A glimpse into hell - is a fact





            09.03.2023
            Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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            Hell Poetry Contest
            Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
            8th place in the contest

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Joe Maverick

March 23, 2023 at 12:18 AM

Only if we pass over our integral choice often By lazyness or by curiosity we venture to Where we are at risk, There can be hereditary Causes, that place people close to that Influence yet we can turn away if we Know of Jesus.'

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 23, 2023 at 2:58 AM

- We are responsible for our own actions, Joe ... many thanks for your comment - hugs

Speaks Volumes

March 11, 2023 at 5:01 PM

Makes me shiver. A devilish description of such an evil abode. Your words are kindred to a warning to us all. Best of luck in the macabre contest Anne-lise

Jennifer Proxenos

March 11, 2023 at 6:04 AM

An excellent thought provoking write so true, a glimpse a into hell is a fact, but I reel back and retract my steps in fact run away as far away from this as I can. I know I have come across the devil in a nightmare whilst in hospital I woke up screaming, woke up all the ward who were grumpy and two nurses who told me in kind words to shut up . I can defy the devil I feel strong enough to do so but in a nightmare I felt vulnerable . Deep feelings my friend take care hugs and love jenny

Linda Alice Fowler

March 10, 2023 at 5:38 PM

Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise! :)

Paula Goldsmith

March 10, 2023 at 12:47 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Imagism Hell write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Kim Rodrigues

March 10, 2023 at 9:36 AM

To be in hell well is hellish! I choose heaven!

Margarita Lillico

March 10, 2023 at 9:22 AM

I didn’t know you had it in you, Sunshine :) Dark Devilish… Congrats!!!

Sotto Poet

March 10, 2023 at 6:35 AM

Anne, you really impressed me with how well you handled this poem. That photo is really well picked as well...! Seems like a winner to me. Good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2023 at 7:42 AM

- I think many people read the title ... and move on ... "hell" is not something we talk about ... but "hell" is mentioned many times in the Bible - Thanks for the great comment, Las :) - hugs