Patricia Bernard Poet Choka

Hell

Flames to high and wide 
Heat hot it melts the human souls
Only one can reign there
Lucifer is in control of all souls
He will win down there
If only the flames could burn to ash
Lucifer never stops his torture




Tricia Bernard
9/22/14

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Brenda Meier-Hans September 24, 2014 at 3:16 PM Good luck on the contest with your poem about fire and brimstone. Patricia Bernard September 24, 2014 at 6:42 PM Thanks Brenda I hope it does ok .....Tricia

Jan Allison September 23, 2014 at 3:28 PM very descriptive write Patricia:-) Hugs jan xxx Patricia Bernard September 23, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thanks Jan I try and sometimes he blesses me;).....Tricia

Gary Bateman September 23, 2014 at 1:26 PM Tricia . . . A quite descriptive and very compelling Choka here. The tenor and pitch of your write is most excellent!! I really enjoyed it -- and your right, Lucifer never stops his torture. This one is a "7" in my book. Best Wishes, Gary Patricia Bernard September 23, 2014 at 7:44 PM Thank you so much I think god blessed me with this;) ....Tricia