Hell

why would God design
a being fragile in will
then punish for that

March 26, 2023
for "Hell Haiku" contest
by Robert James Liguori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/17/2023 9:24:00 AM
In our English bibles, Hell is a mistranslation of the Hebrew "sheol" meaning "pit" or "grave". Never a place of conscious torment by fire. In the NT (Greek text) "hades" is wrongly rendered as Hell. See Ecclesiastes 9:5. When understood as a place or fire and torment it is always understood as symbolic. Hope that helps. / Maurice
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/31/2023 2:58:00 PM
That's very interesting, Maurice. Thank you! I read somewhere the Greek word for young girl was mistranslated to virgin. I'm sure it's easy to do when translating from one language to another. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/29/2023 12:07:00 PM
so glad to see your impressions below same as mine.
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Date: 3/29/2023 8:46:00 AM
With the price of energy now, hell might be the place to be.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/31/2023 3:03:00 PM
Very true words, Paul!
Date: 3/28/2023 9:03:00 AM
A powerful write with just a few words. We can say yes/no at anytime about anything. Life is all about learning. I think hell was made for the evil ones/punishment. They have turned away from God. Why would God want them in heaven with the good/loving people??? Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/29/2023 9:46:00 AM
Paula, that's very thoughtful writing. But, if our own children turn away, do we want them to burn? I believe we wouldn't wish them harm, regardless. Thanks so much for your comments, dear Paula.
Date: 3/27/2023 1:26:00 PM
good thinking, Ann. I believe hell is a state of mind for the guilty, and if a person never learned wrong from right, he can't feel guilt. And endless fire burning people is not logical nor is it what a loving Father would do to his children, no matter how badly they turned out.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. That is exactly how I believe. If a loving Father created us, knowing we're weak, he wouldn't condemn us to burn forever when we erred. Thank you!
Date: 3/27/2023 10:46:00 AM
I do not think there is a heaven or hell, but very astute observation~
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 2:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle. I have never believed in hell, and when I thank God, I think of a being that is a part of everything that is alive, even spiders. :)
Date: 3/27/2023 1:21:00 AM
If Satan was fragile he would not have gone to hell.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 8:41:00 AM
I'm saying I don't believe a loving God would throw those who err into a living hell. Where is the logic there? Thank you for commenting, Victor.
Date: 3/27/2023 12:58:00 AM
Go, Girl, Go! Elizabeth
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Elizabeth. I truly appreciate your comments. :)
Date: 3/26/2023 10:06:00 PM
A good question, Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for thinking so, Subimal.
Date: 3/26/2023 6:42:00 PM
Who knows who ends up in Hell anyway?! All we can do is our level-best here on Earth. ~ Heaven and Hell can wait!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 3:57:00 PM
True, Gershon. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 3/26/2023 4:57:00 PM
Something to think about, Ann. something my dad always said that I hated, "ours is not to question why". Always my first question,"why"
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/27/2023 2:54:00 PM
I know many people who don't question and don't like others to question. But we were given brains for a reason.Thanks for your comments, Daniel.
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