Marty Owens Poet Rhyme

Helicopters

Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...
The helicopters were really flying today.
Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...
There were several firemen there to watch the display.
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Helicopters of various sizes were flapping away.
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All of them operational so they all did say.
Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...
Then into the shower some of them flew.
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After which they would enjoy some homemade brew.
Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...
But couldn't you give us just a little hint?
Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...
Why after awhile the helicopters all were spent.
Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...Flap...

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Skat A February 17, 2010 at 9:20 AM YOU GOT ME ON THIS ONE . AT FIRST I THOUGHT YOU WERE .IN A PLACE FLING MODLE HELICOPTERS ,I GUESS I AM SO WRONG..IRMA

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2010 at 12:55 AM oh, geeez, Marty, is it like that other poem?? Good grief!! (now you gotta tell me if I got it right)

June Ellen Smith February 13, 2010 at 10:07 PM very funny, I like your style on this one. enjoyed reading. Ellen

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2010 at 1:03 AM hmmm, not sure I get this one. I can see DOris didn't either. hahaha. BUT I sure liked the flapping noise!! Was it only about helicopters , marty? I have to watch out for you now that I know how your mind works!! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse February 12, 2010 at 8:45 AM interesting

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2010 at 7:08 PM Unique and ingenious Marty.. just luv those repeating lines for the sounds of the flying machines... enjoyed.. smiles.. luv.. Linda-Marie ... thankxxx for all the nice comments on the many reads of my poetry tonight... luv your input.. into my writings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"