Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Held You Through

Your tears fell so slow..
    I couldn't catch all of them..
          So I just held you..

                                            I gave you my ear..
                                    It doesn't judge or cast words..
                                           Just listens and hears..

                                                                                    My body and soul..
                                                                               And a heart open for you..
                                                                                  Here for all your needs..

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Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2012 at 10:30 PM .Nice.. to have you back Michael... this is a mighty you to give... I know the men i've been with only give me the them.. that $ucks...lol.. But, Nathan... gives me more than i expected... except his ear..lol.. Well Michael, this poem is very warm... thank you..pd

Dinda Minardi January 13, 2012 at 9:02 AM Aww, cute poem!

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2012 at 5:31 PM Sometimes that ability to just hold is all a person needs..Support in time of emotional or other distress..Great expressive work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

James Fraser January 7, 2012 at 9:37 AM I love the message in this Senryu series Michael, it's a wonderful read this fine Saturday Have a lovely weekend :)

Anne Rutherford January 1, 2012 at 12:37 PM Michael,beautifully written and so romantic. Anne.

Red Fiery January 1, 2012 at 9:57 AM a very good senryu...this was another nostalgic poem abt love and u do care for the one...i can see from ur poems...reflects very much ....cheers !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2011 at 4:45 PM She is in Italy, isn't she?? Anyway, she could be back. Please let me know if you find anything out.

Emma Mantle December 31, 2011 at 10:18 AM So beautifully written. Have enjoyed reading your work, I think this will have to go inmy favs. Simple and Stunning. Em :)

Kelli Egloff-Metzgar December 30, 2011 at 2:56 PM LOVELY...Kelli

M.I.A . December 29, 2011 at 8:43 PM soo romantic indeed. good luck for the contest Michael, in romance you are supreme. Wishing you a Great Happy New Year!

Harry Horsman December 29, 2011 at 5:36 AM Awesome Michael, so profound, harry

Daver Austin December 28, 2011 at 1:32 PM Aint love grand...and...this is a grand trio of Senryu. LOve, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown December 28, 2011 at 8:24 AM I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Michael. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol

John Aaron Green December 27, 2011 at 9:41 PM very romantic,,great poem,,so real,,wonderful write............

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2011 at 8:35 PM This one is full of your heart and soul, Michael. Sure the judge will love it!

Pokey Lanford December 27, 2011 at 6:26 PM Beautifully done!

Dawn Mclaughlin December 27, 2011 at 3:29 PM So sweet Dawnie and romantic...thank you for the lovely comment x Dawn Mclaughlin December 27, 2011 at 3:30 PM sorry i ment sweet and romantic and thank you for the lovely comment ...x

Robert Pettit December 27, 2011 at 3:24 PM A nice romantic trio of senryu entries. Good luck with them in the contest.