Held Captive By Night

Sparked alive in the dark, like an old photo, framed
Released from a vault of a million dreams lost
A day, drenched with rain, where my eyes  couldn't claim
to see it as clearly, for it seemed to be crossed
by the moon and the stars, where all dreams have been tossed.
Held captive by night, are the deepest words cloned
where they're not mine to keep, to behold or emboss
I struggle to reach out, and keep them my own

It came in the night without warning or thunder
with a heartbeat, remembered,  from a light that is gone
By morning, forgotten, which leaves me to wonder
why my sleep can't reveal  faces missing so long,
or erase all the heartache that still hovers on
Held captive by night, were the deepest loves grown
where I can't take them out, to behold and to ponder
I struggle to reach out, and keep them  my own

I will gather the stars,  from the deep blue lagoon
With my head on the pillow, my lids squeezing tight
I wait past the hour, in the languid  cocoon
which triggers the conscious, to roll back the night
revealing the faces, again to the light  
With closed eyes, I'll wait, with the stars and the moon
Held captive by night, are the longings I've known
Where dreams aren't  just  promises, that vanish too soon
I struggle to reach out, and keep them my own

Released from a vault of a million dreams lost
held captive by night, are all the longings I've known
With a heartbeat, remembered, from a light that is gone,
I struggle to reach out, and keep them my own


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4/16/15   For Contest: "Not Your Average Ballade"
Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

(Note: I have tweaked the form by following a different rhyme scheme in each stanza, .....and using one line from the first 3 stanzas for the last stanza)
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Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:55 AM
WOW....nice work and tricky turn on the last stanza..smoothly done. Congrats on the top spot...
A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:34 PM
awesome win Carrie... glad to see you on the top...pd
Lindley Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Huge congrats on this fine win my friend! Love this poem and closing stanza is pure gold... A7
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Carrie, congratulations LOVE SKAT :)
Carmack Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 2:04 PM
I liked how you took lines from the previous stanzas to make the last. Congrats Carrie.
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, a beautiful captivating poem. :~) a 7
La France Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Carrie, your tweeked Ballade is beautifully written, full of wondrous words and lines, and I love the theme of it, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Oh the memories, yes I messed up with the missing elements for the contest but honestly I thought I had an NA in the contest and edited it for another contest, will never do that again. . .
La France Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 7:22 AM
and I worked on that poem for days ....
A. Sharma Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Wow Carrie u amaze wid ur exquisite work! Flows so smooth, gl in contest!
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