Heinous Crimes

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" BLEEDING NATURE " MY PHOTO, ©

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On her death bed, Fatally wounded mother nature, bleeds profusely While Ignominious Man Drives further his dagger of ignorance into the heart of life Thus Unwittingly committing at once the most heinous crimes Of Matricide and suicide Under The vigilant eyes of a wrathful God! © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 July 2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2019 1:29:00 PM

- The cat plays with the mouse before it kills ... a powerful write about the man ... - But, unfortunately it is the truth my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/10/2019 5:22:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful comment my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/9/2019 12:53:00 AM

This is worrying Demetrios, our doomsday clock is getting very near midnight and despite all signs and warnings man continues to drive the dagger in even further. Of all creatures on earth there is none more stupid than man. Tom. PS. Last day for me.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/9/2019 2:38:00 AM

When the time comes, Man would be unable to protect himself for the catastrophe will be so great that would not give him time to recover. Chaos would follow and we would not be at a position to do anything. The time is now but as you say Man is so stupit ( Einstein agrees) that cannot understand what he does! Last day in Turkey you mean...not last day! Hahaha. Thank you Tom. Have a safe flight my friend!