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Heed Thine Own Advice

The First Lady wants us all to lose weight Have you seen her from the stern as of late Eat smaller portions says she Well here is my repartee Heed thine own advice before you dictate Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2011 11:43:00 AM

BRAVO Bob .. great words of wisdom .. needs to stop calling the kettle.. and so on .. if u know what I mean... only ONE perfect person lived this Earth and it certainly ain't the first lady .haha.. great one ..masterpiece collection..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/11/2011 11:37:00 AM

Better watch your step, my friend. You'll be getting a visit from the Secret Service! Excellent write, however. Enjoyed. Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2011 11:38:00 PM

hmmm, i hadn't noticed. So she is putting on weight, hmmm?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2011 11:38:00 AM

oh gee, robert... ladies are sooo picky with weight! enjoyed you devilish himor! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 2:38:00 PM

Oooh, naughty, naughty picking on Michelle's "stern," Bob. I did have to laugh though. But now I'm ashamed of myself. If anyone asks, I'll point the finger at you. My bad -- you bad too. Love it! Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/7/2011 12:31:00 PM

hahaha, nice catch, Bob. enjoyed it,