Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Heed Thine Own Advice

The First Lady wants us all to lose weight

     Have you seen her from the stern as of late

          Eat smaller portions says she

               Well here is my repartee

                    Heed thine own advice before you dictate

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 13, 2011 at 11:43 AM BRAVO Bob .. great words of wisdom .. needs to stop calling the kettle.. and so on .. if u know what I mean... only ONE perfect person lived this Earth and it certainly ain't the first lady .haha.. great one ..masterpiece collection..

Ralph Taylor February 11, 2011 at 11:37 AM Better watch your step, my friend. You'll be getting a visit from the Secret Service! Excellent write, however. Enjoyed. Ralph

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2011 at 11:38 PM hmmm, i hadn't noticed. So she is putting on weight, hmmm?

Nette Onclaud February 8, 2011 at 11:38 AM oh gee, robert... ladies are sooo picky with weight! enjoyed you devilish himor! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2011 at 2:38 PM Oooh, naughty, naughty picking on Michelle's "stern," Bob. I did have to laugh though. But now I'm ashamed of myself. If anyone asks, I'll point the finger at you. My bad -- you bad too. Love it! Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta February 7, 2011 at 12:31 PM hahaha, nice catch, Bob. enjoyed it,