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Heed the River's Flow

As the day awakens waving to and fro palm trees sway to greet the dawn urging me to grow Come outside and be as one open up your mind giving way to sight and sound just what might you find Every buzz of every bee every whistle of a bird sings of harmony delight speaking not a single word Am I then to find my place blessed by nature’s call to be joining skyways steeped in blue can I be just really me As the day awakens one thing I do know I was meant to see the sun heed the rivers flow

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Date: 3/19/2023 12:50:00 PM
Happy Sunday with this lovey write. Have a wonderful day/week...............
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Paula, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 3/19/2023 7:51:00 AM
Very nice Mike. Happy Sunday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 8:43:00 AM
Perfect messaging for lazy old me, Mike. Just what I needed to read. Thanks a whole bunch! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thanks GW, hope you have a great week ahead !!!
Date: 3/16/2023 8:17:00 AM
Lovely! We are ourselves, yet part of the whole! Thanks for thoughts to ponder today, my friend!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Kim, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 6:47:00 AM
Never miss to enjoy Nature's charms , either the sun's bright beams as the day awakes or the music and meandering flow of a river. Beautifully penned dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/20/2023 3:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 3/16/2023 5:22:00 AM
So very beautiful Mike! Love the title…Its a draw card. Debx
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Date: 3/15/2023 9:20:00 AM
- A beautiful morning to wake up to, Mike :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/16/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, yes it is xxoo
Date: 3/15/2023 9:18:00 AM
As the day awakens so do we savouring every minute of it living life to the full. Hope you're well Mike. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/16/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom, Happy Thursday!!
Date: 3/15/2023 9:13:00 AM
A delightful poem. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/16/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Victor!

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