Hebrew 12:1-2

My learning......

At times the journey seems difficult 
   The hillocks of life evolve into mountains
The joy set before, tend to feeble and die
   The wishes and hopes we nestle 
                    Tend to break loose

But more time is set
   We are the horizon facing the destiny
The slip we make
   Wisens and uplifts us

The much worry that girdles us
   Glitters and strengthens our hopes
The most times of a blissful life
   Are free from filth of the past


Written between 2000-2003 
Just the young thoughts of the young mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horn Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 7:35 PM
If in my religion I am not strict, I could end up becoming a derelict, Throughout life weaving back and forth, Wondering what Life is really worth. Soon wide path becomes narrow and straight, and forever for God will wait. Answered my prayers each and every one, Together with Jesus who is His Son. Jim Horn
Hunjeri Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Amen. Thank you Jim for visiting my work.
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Scriptures is a wonderful read with lots of wisdom to place forth in our life. 7 Blessings
Hunjeri Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thank you Eve. Blessings to you too
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 7:37 AM
If at such a young age you were reaching for answers in the Holy Scriptures, you were indeed a wise child.
Hunjeri Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Thank you Richard. I come from a strict Christian family. And that has influenced my writtings alot.
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