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Heavy Pewter Clouds

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Just moody..Sara

. On heavy pewter clouds I rise Slowly float to other side Of Swift Creek's fast current that flies The air feels as light as spring But winter moves behind howling

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Dana Smith

Date: 1/12/2012 5:45:00 PM

as Linda-Marie said, the imagery is beautiful.. really enjoyed this one.. your writings always bring a smile to my face.. take care..

The Situation

Date: 1/12/2012 4:38:00 PM

were sharing those same clouds.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2012 8:46:00 PM

so much shown in so few lines Sara.. a great visual of imagery .. must be a beautiful sight my friend..

Jack Horne

Date: 1/11/2012 3:10:00 PM

I love the imagery in this one, my friend

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/11/2012 3:08:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one with its vivid images , jag

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/11/2012 12:27:00 PM

Very wintry "feel" to this Sara...) i wonder why...? ha ha.) i think my screen has just frozen up...!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/11/2012 12:08:00 PM

Ominous. I can recall knowing I was coming down with a cold, because the day before I was so relaxed, "light as spring." Like this one. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2012 12:06:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sara. Your poetry is getting better and better each time you post. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2012 11:38:00 AM

Lovely Sara!(I do not like winter...cold- the spring come in march)oxox love Anne-Lise

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/11/2012 11:22:00 AM

Yes...winter is howling !! Love the wording in this..it just twists into the mind. Enjoyed !!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/11/2012 11:01:00 AM

Such a wonderful flight this is Sara! I really enjoyed the heavy pewter clouds and where the air is as light as spring, great descriptions Sara! You've done very well with this poem! Great Work!!