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Just moody..Sara

Heavy Pewter Clouds

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                                       On heavy pewter clouds I rise
                                         Slowly float to other side
                                Of Swift Creek's fast current that flies
                                    The air feels as light as spring
                                  But winter moves behind howling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/12/2012 5:45:00 PM
as Linda-Marie said, the imagery is beautiful.. really enjoyed this one.. your writings always bring a smile to my face.. take care..
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Date: 1/12/2012 4:38:00 PM
were sharing those same clouds.
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Date: 1/11/2012 8:46:00 PM
so much shown in so few lines Sara.. a great visual of imagery .. must be a beautiful sight my friend..
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:10:00 PM
I love the imagery in this one, my friend
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one with its vivid images , jag
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:27:00 PM
Very wintry "feel" to this Sara...) i wonder why...? ha ha.) i think my screen has just frozen up...!
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:08:00 PM
Ominous. I can recall knowing I was coming down with a cold, because the day before I was so relaxed, "light as spring." Like this one. daver
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sara. Your poetry is getting better and better each time you post. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:38:00 AM
Lovely Sara!(I do not like winter...cold- the spring come in march)oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:22:00 AM
Yes...winter is howling !! Love the wording in this..it just twists into the mind. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:01:00 AM
Such a wonderful flight this is Sara! I really enjoyed the heavy pewter clouds and where the air is as light as spring, great descriptions Sara! You've done very well with this poem! Great Work!!
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