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* This is a new song - it will not be on the present album I'm recording, but will be on the follow-up. I will post the music, (rough draft), sometime soon. *

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Heaven's Tears

(verse 1)

I stand like a cross 
Face skyward and lost
As you drip from my soul with the rain

And deep in my bones
Burned alive - turned to stone
I'm consumed by the kiss of your pain


(chorus)

Heaven shed your tears on me
My eyes no longer cry for me
She took every last one from me
So now I have to cry with
Heaven's tears
Oh, heaven's tears


(verse 2)

My gaze used to swim
And strain to the rim
To drown in the flood of her lies

But that torrent shed
Then depleted and bled
And drained all the weep from my eyes


(chorus)

Heaven shed your tears on me
My eyes no longer cry for me
She took every last one from me
So now I have to cry with
Heaven's tears
Yes now I have to cry with
Heaven's tears
Oh, heaven's tears


(bridge)

Canopy shrouds
Open the clouds
Baptize the gray
Wash me away
Bring on the rains
Open my veins
Put these dry and mournful eyes
To sleep


(verse 3)

Oh how can it be
That sane men can see
Yet not know a dream from a curse

My tears and her blood
Mixed marrow with mud
And I'll never know which is worse

No I'll never know which is worse


(chorus)

Heaven shed your tears on me
My eyes no longer cry for me
She took every last one from me
So now I have to cry with
Heaven's tears
Yes now I have to cry with
Heaven's tears
Oh, heaven's tears
Oh -oh heaven's tears
Cry with heaven's tears

She took the very last


(repeat chorus out)
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Daniel Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:53 AM
This is bone-chilling cry of the soul, Greg, great song:)
Barden Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you so very much, Jo! Blessings! :-) <3
Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Yeah yeah, ok ok Greg...I'm definitely feeling this. Wow just Wow Greg, I love every master stroke of your golden pen on this one. No one does love lost like you man...looking forward to the music! This is a fave for me...heavens tears...I'm feeling it!!
Barden Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!! This was fun, and while I usually write lyrics AFTER the music, I wrote the music around the lyrics this time ... and I loved it - I'm going to do more that way. I'm really psyched that you like this one, Buddy! :-)
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