Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Limerick

Heaven's Grace-W

Poetry is painting but also speaks
Like rain from heaven poetry falls
I’m outside now getting wet
Comes the lightening threat
Let me see if I can put it in bottles.

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Third place win
In honor of John Freeman's Contest

My category is Inspirational and Visual

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Wandering Butterfly February 23, 2011 at 4:46 PM ahh...rain, so soothing...helps me sleep. lol...i like you limerick, DR., thanks for all your thoughts and input on my poetry...me being new on here it helps boost my confidence that i may have just found my way out of every day stresses....ya know?, love, Miranda

Anthony Beesley August 5, 2010 at 8:50 AM nice thoughts but some would can their toxic thoughts like zyclon b and murder the masses with their poetic pollution

Earle Brown August 2, 2010 at 5:55 PM Congrats on your win Dr. Ram.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2010 at 10:09 AM Congratulations to you on your win Dr.Ram in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2010 at 6:39 PM Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on your third place. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico August 1, 2010 at 5:44 PM I lovethis write,my two favorite things rain and painting. Thanks for always taking time to read my wor. Thanks Michael

Ralph Taylor August 1, 2010 at 1:27 PM Congrats, Doc. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 1, 2010 at 11:58 AM Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with a super write and another fantastic win for u my friend... enjoy on this happy Sunday.. with luv..

Debbie Guzzi August 1, 2010 at 7:37 AM hmmmm Dum de dum dum??? 3,4 okies ..1& 4 iffy check the DUM DUM's (nope not me!!!) Andrea told me most times the dictionary includes where the stress is on a word? Light & Love and congrad's if is a charming picture you running around trying to bottle the rain!

James Fraser August 1, 2010 at 4:54 AM Delightful Limerick Dr. Ram. Many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James

John Freeman July 31, 2010 at 11:30 PM Quite the witt in this one Dr Ram. Congratulations, on a good one. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2010 at 6:15 PM Yes I luv the Psalm that states that he puts all our tears ina bottle... I wrote one a few days ago in Haiku similar .. good luck in John's contest.l.with your heavenly words... great minds think alike.. my friend.. with luv..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix July 31, 2010 at 1:05 PM I agree and I like your imagery. Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments on my poems.

Raj Nandy July 31, 2010 at 7:56 AM A GRAND LIMERICK ON POETRY ! We have met in 'poetfreak.com' also ! Since Dec 09 , I came over to 'freak' from 'poemhunter '! Thank you for your generous comments ! -RAJ

Debbie Guzzi July 31, 2010 at 5:21 AM You have been encouraging me to work on metered verse...so...you need here, da,da,DUM, da,da,DUM, da,da,DUM or da,DUM,da,DUM,da,DUM...soup mail!

Gert W. Knop July 31, 2010 at 4:25 AM But don't keep your poems bottled and have them posted on Soup, Dr. Ram! Thank you for your ongoing comments! All the best and good luck for the contest...Gert

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2010 at 10:43 PM Yes, capture those poems in your pretty poetry bottles, Dr.Ram, and good luck in this contest. LUv, Andrea