Heaven's Gates

Bright light before me The sun would be very proud Heaven’s gates arrive Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2011 6:46:00 PM

oh so waiting to see those Pearly Gates u so beautifully wrote of Russell.. sweet hope and inspiration luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2011 4:55:00 PM

soft smile YOU left me such a nice comment..would you like haiku lessons..if so soup mail me..but I need to leave them here in your comments so let me know if that's OK? light & love

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2011 4:50:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Russell

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2011 4:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like going through the tunnel to the light..Thanks for stopping by and reading my out on the porch..I have been missing the porch..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/15/2011 8:54:00 AM

Very inspiring write here Russel. Enjoyed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2011 4:07:00 AM

Russell, a very delightful haiku,,, and image.. wow!,, God bless,..Linda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2011 11:51:00 PM

soothing, uplifting, russell.. your 'kus are getting sharper by the day; wow..:) huggs, nette