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Heaven's Gate

Enter, mere mortal... God's portal... Thou shalt not chortle! _________________________ A tip of the hat to Indiana Shaw for the phrase 'God's portal.' Thank you, my friend! ~ gw

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/20/2020 9:42:00 PM

Wish you hadn't wrote this because if I arrive at the gate I'll think of it and chortle, they'll send me downstairs lol. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2020 7:32:00 PM

Hey, Tom! Boy, I'm awfully sorry about this... I tell you what, I'll make it up to you: I'll be 'downstairs' waiting for you. How's that?! ~ Little Devil

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2020 4:08:00 PM

great triple rhyming in this one, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2020 6:32:00 PM

All that's missing from this poem is the 'Immortal!' lol. Thanks for fun comment, Andrea. Smiles for Miles, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/20/2020 3:22:00 PM

I do believe I will break this commandment and chortle all I want!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2020 6:30:00 PM

Blake Bortles will love you for your chortles, you rebel, you! (OK -- He's a pro football quarterback. Pretty handsome too, at that). :) gw

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/20/2020 3:16:00 PM

Very nice play off Indiana's phrase. Well done to both of you!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2020 6:25:00 PM

You know, 'well done' is Indian's choice, but I like my phrases medium rare. lol. Thank you, Jenna, for your encouragement. :) gw

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/20/2020 2:27:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, O' Lord; that was a pure corker . . . ; )

Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/21/2020 3:30:00 PM

Corker = Very good; excellent. Pure Corker = Pure classic.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2020 5:52:00 PM

I'm emphasizing the 'pure' when it comes to corkers. lol. Thanks, Indiana. ~ Cork and Cabbage, (whatever that means), Gershon

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2020 2:06:00 PM

Smiling, Gershon:) I knew there had to be an 11th commandment! ~ Regards // paul

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2020 5:14:00 PM

Ha, ha! And I always thought the 11th Commandment was: 'Let's see if you can keep the first Ten before I give you any more...' Ha, ha: He's still waiting for us, methinks... Thanks for the fun and funny comment, Paul. Appreciated. ~ Trying to wrap my arms around: 'Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's Ferrari, landscaping, view of the lake... :)