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Heaven's Gate

within every assailable heart-his glory dwells

Heavenly Monoku Contest
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues
01/27/2019

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Paghunda Zahid

September 24, 2021 at 5:23 AM

True, somebody say we'll weighted words.. And I agree with them.

Panagiota Romios

April 6, 2020 at 4:05 AM

My joy to read this win of yours, although I am late. Panagiotaxxx

Charlie Smith

April 6, 2020 at 3:04 PM

Thank you Panagiota...

Paul Marc

April 11, 2019 at 4:22 PM

Wise words my friend :)

Charlie Smith

April 13, 2019 at 6:11 AM

Thank you P.M....

Paul Callus

March 1, 2019 at 7:51 AM

Undisputably true, Charlie! Uplifting. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

March 4, 2019 at 11:58 AM

Thank you Paul...

David Smith

February 27, 2019 at 8:58 PM

Well weighted words my friend. Food for thought for many also. You chose your words wisely and well. Keep them coming. Regards David in NZ

Charlie Smith

February 28, 2019 at 11:55 AM

Thank you David...

Alexis Y.

February 21, 2019 at 1:36 PM

Hi Charlie, Good one-liner! I found it to be lovely and uplifting at the same time. Well done:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

February 21, 2019 at 2:22 PM

Thank you Alexis...

Alexis Y.

February 21, 2019 at 2:19 PM

I see already commented on this gem:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

February 21, 2019 at 2:17 PM

So glad you enjoyed it , thank you Alexis...

P.S. Awtry

February 20, 2019 at 10:12 PM

tears at the beauty of this sentence and its truth...

Charlie Smith

February 21, 2019 at 12:44 AM

Peace be with you P.S., thank you...

Gershon Wolf

February 20, 2019 at 9:49 PM

Unassailable truth, Charlie. "Build me a Sanctuary, and I will dwell in them." (Book of Exodus)… Not in it; not in the sanctuary will the Lord dwell. But in them---in the hearts of those who built it.... Like you wrote!! Wonderful. ~ Gershon

Charlie Smith

February 21, 2019 at 12:42 AM

Thank you very much for the encouragement Gershon, I really appreciated it...

Elaine George

February 16, 2019 at 4:16 AM

BEAUTIFUL...UPLIFTING ...TRUE...ONE LINER. Thank you for this, Charlie. Much appreciated. Elaine

Charlie Smith

February 17, 2019 at 8:23 AM

Thank you Elaine...

Silent One

February 3, 2019 at 1:16 PM

Great one liner my friend..

Charlie Smith

February 7, 2019 at 11:07 AM

Thank you SO...

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2019 at 6:21 PM

back with my congrats for your win.

Charlie Smith

February 2, 2019 at 9:11 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 31, 2019 at 5:53 PM

Lovely done Charlie! Congratulations on your win :) xomo

Charlie Smith

February 1, 2019 at 4:16 PM

Thank you Maureen...

Sandra Haight

January 31, 2019 at 4:46 PM

Yes, very inspirational and well-written, Charlie. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Charlie Smith

February 1, 2019 at 4:16 PM

Thank you Sandra...

Eve Roper

January 31, 2019 at 12:23 PM

Great inspirational Monoku, Charlie. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 12:28 PM

Thank you Eve...

Robert L. Hinshaw

January 30, 2019 at 8:15 PM

Very well said, Charlie, and congrats for your well-deserved win. Honored to share lst place with you - Bob

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 11:41 AM

Thank you Bob, how very kind of you...

Alexis Y.

January 30, 2019 at 5:32 PM

Hi Charie, Great one-liner! Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 11:39 AM

Thank you Alexis...

Harry Horsman

January 30, 2019 at 4:57 PM

Love the sincerity, Charlie.

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 11:33 AM

Thanks Harry...

Kim Rodrigues

January 30, 2019 at 3:35 PM

Love the wording! Congrats, Charlie! xo Kim

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 11:28 AM

Thanks Kim for your consideration and kind words...

Mystic Rose Rose

January 30, 2019 at 12:18 PM

Amen I say to that dear Charlie

Charlie Smith

January 31, 2019 at 11:24 AM

Thank you Pixie...

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 28, 2019 at 12:21 PM

- Beautiful and heavenly, Charlie :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

January 28, 2019 at 12:36 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 28, 2019 at 2:54 AM

Absolutely and eternally true my friend, Charlie! Great Monuku!

Charlie Smith

January 28, 2019 at 6:22 AM

Thank you Demetrios...

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2019 at 4:22 PM

Wonderful, Charlie

Charlie Smith

January 27, 2019 at 8:37 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Vijay Pandit

January 27, 2019 at 2:47 PM

Your words enliven faith, Charlie..truly glorious poem.

Charlie Smith

January 27, 2019 at 3:07 PM

Thank you Vijay...

Caren Krutsinger

January 27, 2019 at 1:34 PM

Well done, my friend. I am bowing to the reverence and holiness of this monoku.

Charlie Smith

January 27, 2019 at 3:07 PM

Thank you Caren...

Constance La France

January 27, 2019 at 11:54 AM

Charlie, so true, he never leaves us ~

Charlie Smith

January 27, 2019 at 3:06 PM

Thank you Dear Heart...

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