Heaven's Doorway
Not just what I expected but beyond
Scenery so appealing there’s no word to describe this
No such thing as uncomfortable or timid
Only invitation, simplicity, liberation, amusement, the works!
Each breath makes me feel brand new
Each footstep encourages me to glide, skip and wiggle my toes even
Sounds blended hitting the ear with confidence
Perfection knows no sharps or flats
Life’s weight lifted from these bodies revealing immaculately beautiful souls
This land has no hierarchy, no worry, no schedule, no walls, no ceiling
Just foundation
That foundation is God
It’s no wonder these souls can fly!
And all of this I’ve seen as I make my way up the steps
To Heaven’s Doorway
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