Charles Reese Poet Triolet

Heaven's beauty triolet

As sunlight slides behind the hill
Then sunset now will turn to night
Now moonlight shines its evening reel
As sunlight slides behind the hill
Heaven's beauty will now reveal
What daylight rays keep out of sight
As sunlight slides behind the hill
Then sunset now will turn to night


For the A TRIOLET TO MAKE MY DAY Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2026 at 5:36 AM Congrats! Love how moonlight shines its evening reel! Charles Reese July 3, 2026 at 6:32 AM So do I thanks for reviewing this poem twice it's much appreciated

Trina Layne July 2, 2026 at 8:03 AM Nicely done, Charles! Congrats. Charles Reese July 3, 2026 at 4:49 AM Thanks glad you enjoyed it

Sara Kendrick July 2, 2026 at 7:25 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K. Charles Reese July 3, 2026 at 4:50 AM Thanks I am glad you liked it

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2026 at 12:47 AM Wow. Your rhythm is flawless like your imagery here. What a well done beauty! Congrats in my contest Charles Reese July 2, 2026 at 3:34 AM It wasn't hard to maintain rhythm in such a small poem glad to be one of your 1st place finishers I had fun writing it

Bartholomew Williams June 20, 2026 at 1:31 PM Congratulations, Charles, on an uplifting triolet and well-deserved POTD (on June 18th) recognition!! Well done! Best wishes on a high placement in the contest. Blessings & very best, Bartholomew Charles Reese June 22, 2026 at 3:39 PM Thanks I am very glad you enjoyed it

Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2026 at 9:00 PM Well done triolet! So pretty! Congrats on POTD! Charles Reese June 19, 2026 at 9:31 PM Thank you I am very glad you enjoyed it

Sotto Poet June 19, 2026 at 12:29 PM Magnificent imagery; Congratulations on being selected for POTD!

Constance La France June 18, 2026 at 5:39 PM Charles, very nice and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~ Charles Reese June 19, 2026 at 5:24 AM Thank you very much I never expected to receive it

Brandy Nicole June 18, 2026 at 4:19 PM Watching the sunset at the end of the day, is beyond breathtaking. The images you paint are beautiful. Congratulations Charles, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Brandy Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 4:56 PM Thanks I am very glad you enjoyed it feel free to read and comment on some of my other poems

James Graham June 18, 2026 at 9:25 AM Cool! Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:41 PM Thanks

Karen Croft June 18, 2026 at 4:33 AM congratulations on your POTD Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:41 PM Very glad you enjoyed it

sara Etgen-Baker June 18, 2026 at 4:13 AM breathtaking imagery! congrats on your POTD designation

Tania Kitchin June 18, 2026 at 3:36 AM Charles, nicely done with beautiful imagery. Congratulations on POTD. Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:40 PM Glad you enjoyed my little poem

Tom Cunningham June 18, 2026 at 3:05 AM Love the imagery in your verse Charles, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:39 PM I'm very glad you enjoyed it

Beryl Edmonds June 18, 2026 at 2:14 AM Congratulations Charles on having received the honour of poem of the day for your lovely Triolet… Beryl Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:36 PM Thanks never expected pod

Karen Jones June 18, 2026 at 12:38 AM Nice write! Congratulations on winning potd! Charles Reese June 18, 2026 at 1:29 AM Thanks glad you liked it don't know the results yet but I do hope to do well in the contest

Alison A Smith nee Howarth June 16, 2026 at 8:19 PM A very good Triolet. You need to check the contest rules. Goodluck. Charles Reese June 17, 2026 at 7:00 AM Thanks for the review I'm glad you enjoyed it I reread the rules and made the needed change thanks for catching that