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Heavenly Vows

Speak my name, learn me through deep ways... Bring horizons which enthrall while blossoms twirl as night sashays to enchant our flamed spirit's call that time, in slow-hour dance obeys. When seasons reap a love's harvest Let’s wander among clustered leaves; fallen gold on oak then we rest igniting vows …heaven believes, until one nuptial theme song weaves. 8/3/2019 Janice Canerdy's English Quintain Contest

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Date: 9/3/2019 6:49:00 PM
Lovely piece. Butterflies wings brushed the page, I am sure of it. Excellent write. Ann
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:11:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette. A lovely verse.
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Date: 9/2/2019 9:37:00 AM
Just now found this on 100 best list. So much depth and beauty!!!
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Date: 8/11/2019 1:53:00 PM
Just so exquisitely penned, nette. See you with this one in the Top Winner's Circle! :) gw
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Date: 8/7/2019 12:30:00 PM
Talent and a subsequent gem from a talented poetess 'Speak my name. learn me through deep ways ......' this says it all. Excellent poetry. Hugs, Jenn.
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Date: 8/4/2019 3:21:00 PM
A graceful poem from a gifted artist . I especially liked the beginning lines and how it ended!
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Date: 8/4/2019 2:12:00 AM
You never fail to inspire us nette on how to write great poetry. Tom
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Date: 8/4/2019 1:40:00 AM
A dance that lasts forever is the feeling!
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Date: 8/3/2019 5:40:00 PM
WOW! This is quite an amazing write, Nette: Speak my name, learn me through deep ways...Bring horizons which enthrall while blossoms twirl as night sashays. Superbly done..for a TOP win.
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