Nette Onclaud Poet Quintain (English)

Heavenly Vows

Speak my name, learn me through deep ways...
Bring horizons which enthrall
while blossoms twirl as  night sashays
to enchant our flamed spirit's call
that time,   in slow-hour dance  obeys.

When seasons reap a love's harvest
Let’s wander among clustered leaves;
fallen gold on oak     then we rest 
igniting vows …heaven believes,
until one nuptial theme song weaves.



8/3/2019
Janice Canerdy's English Quintain Contest

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Ann Foster September 3, 2019 at 6:49 PM Lovely piece. Butterflies wings brushed the page, I am sure of it. Excellent write. Ann

Sunlite Wanter September 2, 2019 at 9:37 AM Just now found this on 100 best list. So much depth and beauty!!!

Gershon Wolf August 11, 2019 at 1:53 PM Just so exquisitely penned, nette. See you with this one in the Top Winner's Circle! :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos August 7, 2019 at 12:30 PM Talent and a subsequent gem from a talented poetess 'Speak my name. learn me through deep ways ......' this says it all. Excellent poetry. Hugs, Jenn.

Juaneco Torrente August 4, 2019 at 3:21 PM A graceful poem from a gifted artist . I especially liked the beginning lines and how it ended!

Tom Cunningham August 4, 2019 at 2:12 AM You never fail to inspire us nette on how to write great poetry. Tom

Vegter Papyrus August 4, 2019 at 1:40 AM A dance that lasts forever is the feeling!

Vijay Pandit August 3, 2019 at 5:40 PM WOW! This is quite an amazing write, Nette: Speak my name, learn me through deep ways...Bring horizons which enthrall while blossoms twirl as night sashays. Superbly done..for a TOP win.