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Heavenly Tears

Dark clouds gathered in the west the wind whipped and howled the sky shed thousands of tears as hunger crouched on the ground below crying continued though out the afternoon as the hungry bowls were fed moist wet tears slowly subsided only to come rushing back again these tears from the heaven eventually ceased satisfying the thirst of the land. 24/05/17

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Date: 5/30/2017 2:58:00 PM
- Sorry I did not read this wonderful poem earlier ... "tears from the heaven" ... lovely dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/31/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for your comments. Nice beautiful day in Sask. today. love phyl
Date: 5/24/2017 8:07:00 PM
"Someone told me long ago. There's a calm before the storm. I know. It's been coming for some time" The rain is always welcome, Mrs Phyllis:)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/31/2017 4:22:00 PM
I wanna know have you ever seen the rain---now you have me singing the song. lol Thanks for the comment. love phyl
Date: 5/24/2017 6:35:00 PM
It seems we're always needing "tears" on our land, but I all too well know about those black clouds in the west. Lovely poem, Phyllis.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/15/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thanks you for your comment. I am a little late in my replies. love phyl

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