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Heavenly Pillow Fight

Snowflakes softly spill frozen feathers floating free wash the world in white To my daughter, Laura.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 3/3/2013 8:54:00 AM
Robin, many blessings on your featured poem this passed week. Have yourself a new and awesome week.:-) Always & Forever * LINDA
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Date: 1/17/2009 1:13:00 PM
your haikus are gems,in the midst of all your precious poetry....liked it lotz** Maryam
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Date: 12/11/2008 1:47:00 AM
Great poem here, this is infact a hidden jewel. I don't know where I was when you posted this one but I'm glad I found it. I love haiku's...Raul
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Date: 12/2/2008 12:58:00 AM
Great Haiku painting a precious picture for this time of year. Love the alliteration. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/1/2008 2:44:00 AM
Awww, such a pretty sight for you and your daughter to share, lovely, Kristin
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Date: 11/30/2008 5:59:00 PM
I love the combination of forms in this poem...both haiku and alliteration! It has such a lovely, soft feel about it, and the title makes me smile! Nice, Robin!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/30/2008 5:41:00 PM
Very Beautiful Dear, Lovely & Precious Robin!:) It shows your true heart dear~So tender and beaitiful you truly are! And, beauty is not held within outward appearance precious lady~But 'true beauty,' can only be found within ones heart & soul!! So, yes, within my eyes, you are extremely beautiful indeed~And this write among many of your others, proves this truth to be!!~"Have A Beautiful Evening Dear Robin~My Love Always To You, Forever, John!"~Bye Dear Lady!:)
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:41:00 PM
Love the combination haiku/alliteration. Simply beautiful. i love the snow. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/30/2008 2:49:00 PM
such a warm and most beautiful piece you wrote. thank you for reading if i could be and for your kind comment.
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Date: 11/30/2008 2:30:00 PM
Well done, this is beautiful. BG
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Date: 11/30/2008 2:09:00 PM
Marvelous 's,' 'f' and 'w' alliteration! ...just a super piece! Love. Keith
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