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Heavenly Pillow Fight

Snowflakes softly spill
frozen feathers floating free
wash the world in white



To my daughter, Laura.

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Poet Destroyer A

March 3, 2013 at 8:54 AM

Robin, many blessings on your featured poem this passed week. Have yourself a new and awesome week.:-) Always & Forever * LINDA

Maryam Jameela Haniff

January 17, 2009 at 1:13 PM

your haikus are gems,in the midst of all your precious poetry....liked it lotz** Maryam

Raul Moreno

December 11, 2008 at 1:47 AM

Great poem here, this is infact a hidden jewel. I don't know where I was when you posted this one but I'm glad I found it. I love haiku's...Raul

Nigel Fawcett

December 2, 2008 at 12:58 AM

Great Haiku painting a precious picture for this time of year. Love the alliteration. Love, Nigel

Kristin Reynolds

December 1, 2008 at 2:44 AM

Awww, such a pretty sight for you and your daughter to share, lovely, Kristin

Carrie Richards

November 30, 2008 at 5:59 PM

I love the combination of forms in this poem...both haiku and alliteration! It has such a lovely, soft feel about it, and the title makes me smile! Nice, Robin!! ~ Carrie

John Rhinem

November 30, 2008 at 5:41 PM

Very Beautiful Dear, Lovely & Precious Robin!:) It shows your true heart dear~So tender and beaitiful you truly are! And, beauty is not held within outward appearance precious lady~But 'true beauty,' can only be found within ones heart & soul!! So, yes, within my eyes, you are extremely beautiful indeed~And this write among many of your others, proves this truth to be!!~"Have A Beautiful Evening Dear Robin~My Love Always To You, Forever, John!"~Bye Dear Lady!:)