Richard Lamoureux Poet Pantoum

Heavenly Kiss

You flew to me from beyond the clouds
Sent to soothe my troubled heart
I felt the warmth of your kiss on my forehead 
In that moment my sadness blew away

Sent to soothe my troubled heart
You looked deep within my very soul
In that moment my sadness blew away
With your help I escaped the gray

You looked deep within my very soul
A breath of light into the darkness
With your help I escaped the gray
Your angel eyes looked into mine

A breath of light into the darkness
So much comfort yet no words spoken
Your angel eyes looked into mine
For me a glimpse of heaven's glory

So much comfort yet no words spoken
I felt the warmth of your kiss on my forehead
For me a glimpse of heaven's glory
You flew to me from beyond the clouds

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Vicki Acquah October 20, 2013 at 6:38 PM I am reading your poem on the radio/ to hear click on link. http://www.blogtalkradio.com/re-verse/2013/10/20/re-verse-classic-poetry-open-mic-1 Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2013 at 8:03 AM Wow! Really? I am honored, I will check it out.

Vicki Acquah October 20, 2013 at 6:29 PM I am reading your poem on the radio/ to hear click on link. http://www.blogtalkradio.com/re-verse/2013/10/20/re-verse-classic-poetry-open-mic-1

Vicki Acquah October 20, 2013 at 12:04 AM I COME SEEKING ONE POEM AND FIND ANOTHER'.. BEAUTIFUL ..THAT'S DOPAMINE RISING..LOVE IS SUCH AN EUPHORIA .NEXT TIME COPY AND PASTE THE ADDRESS OF THE POEMS YOU WOULD LIKE ME TO READ IMPARTICULAR....i AM ENJOYING YOUR WORK. Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2013 at 8:14 AM Thanks Vicki, I am working from an IPad so not quite sure how to do that.

Vicki Acquah October 20, 2013 at 12:03 AM I COME SEEKING ONE POEM AND FIND ANOTHER'.. BEAUTIFUL ..THAT'S DOPAMINE RISING..LOVE IS SUCH AN EUPHORIA .NEXT TIME COPY AND PASTE THE ADDRESS OF THE POEMS YOU WOULD LIKE ME TO READ IMPARTICULAR....i AM ENJOYING YOUR WORK.

Wendy Meyer October 19, 2013 at 12:35 AM A captivating kiss, no doubt...angelic...a beautiful winged kiss, I suppose...^_^ Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2013 at 8:15 AM Thanks Wendy

Eileen Manassian October 4, 2013 at 2:15 PM Congrats on this, Richard...beautiful! Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2013 at 8:15 AM ;0)

Monterey Sirak September 22, 2013 at 6:06 AM Your poetry is comfort, light and warmth. I love spending a morning catching up on your poems. Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 6:54 AM Aww, thanks Monterey.

Liam Mcdaid September 19, 2013 at 4:38 PM PENNED REAL BEAUTIFULLY Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 6:55 AM Thanks Liam.

Heather Ober September 18, 2013 at 6:45 AM Very touching, and written with beautifully depicted emotion. (By the way, my grandparents live in Kitchener, so I know that area very well! My grandpa was a prof at the University of Waterloo!) Richard Lamoureux September 18, 2013 at 7:27 AM Really, I get back to Kitchener every couple of years. My mom still lives there, my sister and her two girls live in Ayr and my brother is in Oakville.

Laura Breidenthal September 18, 2013 at 1:51 AM What a splendid poem. A little love goes very far. This is just sopping with love and gratefulness. Truly a very rewarding piece to read. Keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura Richard Lamoureux September 18, 2013 at 7:28 AM Aw thanks, that is so sweet.

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2013 at 5:47 PM this was the perfect topic for a pantoum form poem. Wonderfully done, sir!!! (to echo Tim here!) Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:45 PM You guys are making me feel old calling mr sir *lol*

Tim Ryerson September 17, 2013 at 5:41 PM Beautifully done sir!...I have tried this form and others similar and... Brain freeze! Love the first and last lines especially - Tim Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:44 PM Thanks Tim, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Shanity Rain September 17, 2013 at 12:02 PM Angelic , I love this write ~ frustrated with my last poem , very happy to come here !! Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:43 PM Thanks Yvette. Sorry your frustrated I'm sure you will work it out.

Eileen Manassian September 17, 2013 at 11:59 AM Ethereal....Beautiful....heavenly.....sweet. Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:42 PM ;0) thanks Eileen.

Jack Ellison September 17, 2013 at 11:13 AM Drake has it right, "mesmerizing" my fellow Canuck! Beautifully written...cheers! Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:41 PM Thanks Jack.

Poet Tacito September 17, 2013 at 10:24 AM Mesmerizing to no end. "I escaped the gray"...a vital message for a renewal of heart. A very eloquent writing. Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:40 PM Thanks so much Drake.

Red Fiery September 17, 2013 at 10:01 AM Adding this to my favourites. ..excellent ! ..I simply loved this...you looked deep within my very soul ...how romantic and emotional. ..thank u for sharing ur magnificent work Richard. .! Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 10:39 PM You honor me again Red. Thanks for this generous comment.

Sandra Adams September 17, 2013 at 9:11 AM this is beautiful Rick...haven't tried this form in a while but you did a great job with it...well penned poem :) Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 9:13 AM Thanks Sandra. I'm pleased you like it.

Colleen Bono September 17, 2013 at 8:36 AM Oh ya, first to see this one. Fantastic as usual. Hope all is well with you. Love Colleen Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM Coleen! So nice to hear from you. How have you been?