Kash Poet Poet Italian Sonnet

Heavenly Beauty

H ey girl you remind me of an angel
E mereld your eyes attract me always
A lthough never talked to you but I guess
V ery sweet your voice like chimes of a bell
E vening prayer's chanting from the temple
N ever could I touch your beautiful face
L et me touch its velvetness and caress
Y our angelic face hey my sweet angel.

B eauty so much heavenly and pristine
E manating an aura of sweet love
A lluring me to fall in love again
U ndoubtedly best I have ever seen
T hunderstruck I am by your love my dove
Y ou just start drenching me with your love rain.




© 2011 kashinath karmakar (18th May 2011)
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Contest:The Sonnet Man's Acrostic Challenge

Sponsor:Dakarai Cobb

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Nette Onclaud May 19, 2011 at 7:09 PM that's the way i like it, ahah! greeeat write with winning wishes, kashi... check my footle!..:) huggs, nette

Gwendolen Song May 19, 2011 at 6:59 PM I don't know, but maybe it would be better to capitalize the B in Beauty for your title-Still can't get past the thunderstruck by your love, my dove. Holy smokes.....cool! Can't wait to see the outcome of this riveting contest. Gwendolen

Don Johnson May 19, 2011 at 4:46 AM very good and hard to manage some to learn before i'll try well done mate Don

Gwendolen Song May 18, 2011 at 7:13 PM The last 2 lines are superb and energizing! I think she, whoever SHE is will be mesmerized by this creative side of the poet! Nice write! Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire May 18, 2011 at 3:57 PM You did a great job combining the acrostic and sonnet forms to describe your special angel, Kash. Excellent entry for the contest and I'm sending winning wishes your way! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2011 at 2:16 PM This is beautiful, really beautiful, Kash. And romantic! I hope it does really well in the contest. It was quite the challenge.Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 1:57 PM Super great entry Kash ..good luck in the contest.. luv the title and the extensions in your lines of creativity my friend.. awesome piece..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 18, 2011 at 1:24 PM Passionate and full of feelings of affection, kashinath. Good luck in the contest,

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2011 at 11:48 AM I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Kashinath. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

Lakisa Battie May 18, 2011 at 11:22 AM Wonderful write best of luck in the contest... Keep writing and expressing...

Kash Poet May 18, 2011 at 10:31 AM :)