Heaven Waits

How can I reach it
I just want to walk across
The bridge to heaven



for familiarity unknown contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/14/2010 10:01:00 PM
very nice, Faleshia. How did I ever miss all these poems of yours? I have noticed a few of the longer ones I had already commented to!
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:15:00 AM
expectations are always awaited. Good one.
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Date: 4/18/2010 6:46:00 AM
Nicely written Senryu, Andrea! Enjoyed reading it. Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:19:00 AM
Excellent, Faleshia! A definite winner...Thanks for reading and posting your usual, kind comment for me....I wish you good luck in the contest, anyway, even though I doubt that you'll be needing it! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/14/2010 11:43:00 AM
Nice one! enjoyed, P.D. was here
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:46:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. I want to get on that "bridge to heaven." Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/13/2010 12:32:00 PM
I like your approach here. Very unique! Best of luck in the contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:34:00 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:45:00 PM
nice bridge Faleshia- good luck to you
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:47:00 PM
Very explicit images. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:00:00 PM
Excellent Faleshia and good luck in Gareth's contest... his photo was exciting to write a poem for and wish u much success..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:48:00 PM
Yes, me too Faleshia. Good luck in contest. Agape, Moses
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