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I often think about “Heaven”. Is it an idea or a place? Something to hope for, believe in; Something that only comes with grace? Somewhere to meet Him face to face? Foolishly, some would prefer Hell; Would rather follow he that fell. If there should be a “Judgement Day”, I’d rather avoid brimstone smell. Forever’s a long time to stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 10:38:00 AM
Mark~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2016 1:26:00 AM
Belated thanks for the positive comment.
Date: 2/6/2015 11:02:00 PM
I doubt that many people will be seeing fire and brimstone. I believe hell is what we will have created in our mind, the hell we will live with for sins committed on earth. Hopefully heaven is what I hope it to be. Congrats for your win.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/7/2015 12:04:00 AM
Actually, I imagine it as something like a blackhole.
Date: 2/3/2015 1:59:00 PM
Isnt it though....I like this and would have placed it higher.congrats...BG
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/3/2015 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Barbara.
Date: 2/3/2015 7:53:00 AM
New way of looking at heaven/Hell dichotomy. God bless. congrats on win Mark>love>rajat
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/3/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 2/3/2015 6:55:00 AM
Love your take on the theme Mark - many congrats:-) hugs Jan x
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/3/2015 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always.
Date: 2/3/2015 5:36:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/3/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thanks. Always enjoy your contests.

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