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Heaven On Earth

Beyond the gloom and grey of worldly ills
I pass through flowered fields and rolling hills.
A mountain sleeps beneath great oaks and pines
That shade the giant ferns and climbing vines.

There is a spring that flows up from the ground
With nothing but tranquility around.
It is the place I go to be alone
To sit and think upon my pauper's throne.

Sometimes I think about things said and heard. 
Seek clarity in mem'ries time has blurred.
I'll think about my loved ones who have passed
And all the years I've squandered living fast.

As shadows lengthen 'neath the tiring sun
And all the battles deep within are won.
I always kneel and thank God for his grace
Then feel His presence in my special place.


   4/29/2021
  by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Johnson Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 5:43 AM
This is a beautiful poem ! I enjoyed reading it :)
Turner Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thank you, Charity. I appreciate your kindness. have a nice weekend:)
Ricci Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:10 AM
Good Morning Once Again Daniel. Hello. I turned to this entry because your title caught my eye. Allow me to say this is an entry to be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Your words read very smooth and the rhyme was never forced or fake. Also I very much liked the quiet voice and tone that is so fitting for anyone's special place. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile)
Turner Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Thank you, Lisa. I really appreciate when people take the time to read my older poem. I consider that the highest honor.
Mcgee Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:19 PM
An absolute gem of a write, Daniel. Congrats on your top win. Jeanne
Kulkarni Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Absolutely true Daniel! Thank you for the reminder to live in gratitude always!! Beautifully penned!
Kauffman Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Another win, including a POTD, for this lilting poem of gratitude for God's grace, Daniel. Oh that everyone would have that special place to feel God's presence. Blessings to you. Congratulations!
Curtis Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Congrats Dan, Love it, I almost bought a Pauper's throne once but, I couldn't afford a pauper's palace to put it in. It's comforting to know you are still on the throne......as is should be... take care my friend
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 10:41 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win in my contest, Danny. Thanks for entering! SoupMail! Janice
Turner Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Janice. I appreciate your kindness. Hoping you are well:)
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Another one of your talented writes, Daniel. I missed your poem of the day. BIG congrats on the well deserved honor. Fabulous, elegant write!
Turner Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 6:17 PM
How kind:) Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and support. Have a top shelf weekend:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:11 PM
I love, love, LOVE this poem that pays tribute to the sanctity of tranquility Daniel! I hope you have posted this at PFT? If not please do. I am Faving this most beautiful garden of lines. Congratulations on your much deserved honor of POTD! Blessings xxoo
Turner Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much Connie. I think I did. I hope you are feeling much better these days. You have been missed:)
Cronin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:05 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
Turner Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Can you feel me smiling? Thank you, Jeannie. Be well:)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Turner Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, Kim. It is always my pleasure when you visit:)
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Your 'pauper's throne' is rich in profound thoughts! Congrats on POTD, Daniel! Best wishes, Gershon
Turner Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate that. Nice to see you again. How's thangs?
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Lovely...Congratulations Daniel Turner on POTD.
Turner Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Arturo. Nice to see you again. How has the world been treating you?
Zahid Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 4:52 PM
How smooth... Beautiful rhyming... Stunning imagery... Overall a great write... Congrats
Turner Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Paghunda. I appreciate your kindness. I trust you had a great weekend?
Dutta Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 10:00 PM
I am touched with the word pauper's throne. I feel the depth of your poem. But I I have confusion about existence of God. Blessing.
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Thank you Anisha. Honestly, there have been times in my life when i too felt confused. It's simply a belief. Wonderful to see you again. I hope all is well with you:)
Ligon Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Great imagery. Nice to have such a place to get away to be alone with God.
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Juliet Ligon. The perfect name for a Shakespeare poem/play:) I appreciate your kindness and your time. I hope all is well with you.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:18 PM
Love this. God bless you and Congrats on POTD :) Love it. Love, Gina
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Gina. I appreciate your kindness and your support. hoping you and yours are well.
Goff Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Beautiful, peaceful images, Daniel! Enjoyed your surgical use of contractions! a popular Celtic facility...have sampled such myself at times...heavenly in Minnesota t'day! on my way out! cheers mate! not sure what dust-up referred 2 below...no time for nonsense...jmg
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Thank you, James. They come in handy when you are trying to write in iambic pentameter:) It's a beautiful day here today, too. I think I'll mow the lawn. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a top shelf day!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 9:18 PM
My evangelical mom would have put your blessed words to music, Daniel, my compliments for your on the roll achievement, Aloha!
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, William. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a wonderful day:)
Nicole Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:51 PM
"I always feel His presence, in my special place" This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. He is always near. You paint such vivid images with your words. Congratulations Daniel, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Thank you, Brandy. It is always my pleasure when you visit. i hope all is well with you.
Seeker Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Gods grace is the all! So happy to have discovered this treasure ... and a POTD, too!
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Where would any of us be without it? Thank you. US, for the friendly visit. I appreciate your support.
Fenn Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Such a serene poem. Thank you for that, and congrats on POTD!
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Thank you for the friendly visit, Jennifer. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:02 PM
this goes really well with your blog. (you were the one who blogged on how peaceful nature made you feel, right?) this is a wonderful sonnet on that topic.
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Andrea. These are supposedly rhyming couplets in iambic pentameter but I understand your confusion because I usually do write sonnets. How are you doing today? Feeling better?
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:26 PM
A good place for the muse to be fed nutritious thoughts. I enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive lines. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Ms Sara. I appreciate your support. How's the weather over in GA. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Merryman Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Sounds like a wonderful place, Daniel! Congrats on your POTD with your peaceful, descriptive write! Blessings, Kim M
Turner Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Kim Nice to see you today Hoping you are well.
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