Heaven On Earth

Four and a half year old grandson
Climbs up my legs
Into my lap.
Lies down on me like a weighted blanket.
Arms around my neck.
I feel his heart beat.
Heaven on Earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/9/2019 4:35:00 AM
I couldn't agree more Caren. Those blissful moments fade too fast as they grow at warp speed. I miss those baby days. Beautiful! ; ) xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 11:53:00 AM
It happened on Saturday and I just sighed with pure happiness and full contentment.
Date: 5/9/2019 4:28:00 AM
I'll bet he's a cutie!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 11:53:00 AM
He is so adorable he would dazzle your eyes out.
Date: 5/8/2019 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful.. Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 11:36:00 PM
Thank you. This was a quick write immediately after he tore off, and left me for the swings.
Date: 5/8/2019 1:26:00 PM
oh so sweet and true! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 2:13:00 PM
It is so true!
Date: 5/8/2019 10:22:00 AM
Best blankets on heavens and earth. And backpacks too) It's lovely, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 11:12:00 AM
It is the best feeling in the world,one I will treasure in all of my worlds.
Date: 5/8/2019 8:45:00 AM
Adorable, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 5/8/2019 8:17:00 AM
- A wonderful feeling poem, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM
It came seconds after it happened.
Date: 5/8/2019 7:29:00 AM
This is so so so beautiful :) My heart smiled at the beauty of this heavenly feeling :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM
Be a grandmother first if you can!
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