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Heaven On Earth

Four and a half year old grandson Climbs up my legs Into my lap. Lies down on me like a weighted blanket. Arms around my neck. I feel his heart beat. Heaven on Earth

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2019 4:35:00 AM

I couldn't agree more Caren. Those blissful moments fade too fast as they grow at warp speed. I miss those baby days. Beautiful! ; ) xxoo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 11:53:00 AM

It happened on Saturday and I just sighed with pure happiness and full contentment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2019 4:28:00 AM

I'll bet he's a cutie!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 11:53:00 AM

He is so adorable he would dazzle your eyes out.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/8/2019 5:22:00 PM

Beautiful.. Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 11:36:00 PM

Thank you. This was a quick write immediately after he tore off, and left me for the swings.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/8/2019 1:26:00 PM

oh so sweet and true! :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 2:13:00 PM

It is so true!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/8/2019 10:22:00 AM

Best blankets on heavens and earth. And backpacks too) It's lovely, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 11:12:00 AM

It is the best feeling in the world,one I will treasure in all of my worlds.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2019 8:45:00 AM

Adorable, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2019 8:17:00 AM

- A wonderful feeling poem, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM

It came seconds after it happened.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/8/2019 7:29:00 AM

This is so so so beautiful :) My heart smiled at the beauty of this heavenly feeling :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 AM

Be a grandmother first if you can!