Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Triolet

' Heaven Knows '

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Shutter captured lady in the rail
Sitting in the midst of her woe
Feels like a demon ... Beelzebub? fail?
Shutter captured lady in the rail
In her being, sins are in veil
Myriad tears now pouring, herself is her foe
Shutter captured lady in the rail
Sitting in the midst of her woe ...

Fallen angel from heaven's gate
Inundate with dewdrops of tears
Sent to seek for her humanly fate
Fallen angel from heaven's gate
To discern the worth of her blasphemy's weight
Heart's now bonded with God - sky clears
Fallen angel from heaven's gate
Inundate with dewdrops of tears ...

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*-* jun-jun villanueva
*-* IN THE AFTERGLOW *-* contest entry
*-* sponsored by nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones August 14, 2011 at 8:38 PM Your way with words is captivating me, jun-jun. Nice write, congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:33 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,jun-jun

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:32 PM JUN-jun, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:22 PM congrats jun-jun on taking fourth place in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry luv..enjoy..

Russell Sivey August 7, 2011 at 1:11 AM Wow such emotion...I love poems like these. Good Luck in the contest, you have a good chance!!

Jack Ross Jr. August 6, 2011 at 10:55 PM Wonderful write Lovely lady loved it...with love...old Jack