Ivor Davies Poet Rhyme

Heaven In Hell

All people that on Earth do Dwell
if you have sex you'll go to Hell
unless of course you share a ring
then God will let you do your thing.
But you of course must play the game
that hypocrites shout in his name;
the rules are clear you must not stray,
don't question God, it's just that way!

But who interprets God's true word
the story really is absurd,
his rules of course were set in stone
by Moses looking for a home.
But even he thought they were crap,
his temper led to that mishap
when even stone was forced to break,
the rewrite.... just a second take?

In name of God, from broken stone,
we must not stray from those at home
or you will find without a doubt
that from your home you'll be thrown out.
But was it not another deed
forbid by God let Eve conceive?
For only when he cast both out
did birth of Mankind come about.

All people that on Earth do Dwell
if we have sex we'll go to Hell.
But when we're in that deepest pit,
as long as everyone can fit,
I'm sure we all will have some fun
where with our friends we're joined as one
and maybe when down there we dwell
we'll share the Devil's wife as well!

Ivor G Davies

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Wally Flint April 27, 2015 at 11:45 AM Ivor - A very brave poem. I wrote a similar one you might like: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/progressive_christianity_666890 Ivor Davies May 2, 2015 at 6:11 PM Read you link and enjoyed the content. I find that having a fair knowledge of the bible helps one to put things in to perspective and gives excellent fodder for poetry! Although I used to post a lot on lit.org it is easier to see my work on my own site www.rhymingpoet.co.uk Although this is a personal site and not for other poets to post on..... Ivor