Heaven Celestial

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Free Verse. My most original Star Diamond phrased used, the first of its kind. First version written more then 25 years ago.  When thoughts of my diamond ring and astronomy over the virgin internet like netscape and looking at the new hubble space telescope pics. A developed write. Final edit update 12/20/2020

            Beaming brilliant beautiful bright stars.
            These diamonds, twinkling, sparkling. 
            Diamonds hung in the black velvet night.
            They shinning like diamond crystal lights.

            The Sun’s radiant light.
            A heavenly hot heavy circular sphere. 
            Our planetary system is orbiting it.
            
            Icy comets are extending their tail and rolling by.
            Rocky asteroids, saying hi and good-bye.
            Meteorites, streaking, passing in the day and night skies.

            Multicolor are the cloudy nebulae.
            These are Orion, Helix, Crab, Eagle and Ring.
            Horsehead, Owl, Tarantula and Omega.
            All having stunning stars in them. 

            Galaxies with different shapes: some are Spirals.
            Some Galaxies shapes are called a Bar-Spiral.
            Galaxies shapes that are Elliptical.
            Galaxies shapes that are most Irregular.

            Galaxies names like: Milky Way - looking milky, 
            Whirlpool is whirly, Tadpole looks like a tadpole,
            The Sombrero - looking like a Sombrero, 
            The Crown of Thorns - looks like a crown of thorns,
            The Cartwheel, that cartwheels, 
            Andromeda, Messier 87 and Sunflower, etc.
             
            An over estimated 200 billion and more galaxies. 
            A Super Massive Black Hole are in most of their middle.  
            Over time there are big bangs, of Super-Novas exploding.
            A Quasar, brightest of all the Cosmos lights.
            The Universe filled with stars with colors of all various types.              

             An over estimated 200 billion and more galaxies. 
             A Super Massive Black Hole are in most of their middle. 
             Over time there are big bangs, of Super-Novas exploding.
             A Quasar, brightest of all the Cosmos lights.
             The Universe filled with stars with colors of all various types. 
             A panorama, full of spectacular, splendid visual sites.  
             A God made amazing showcase theater thriller, block buster.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/11/2018 9:10:00 AM
Wow, what a beautiful write.. this is magnificent! It reminds me of Doctor Who, your descriptions, and I so love your ending :)
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:30:00 PM
View again updated, now rated a 8.2 on Allpoetry. Amen, Blessings
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:18:00 PM
Thank you RV for your nice comments. Heaven and Nature are and can be beautiful indeed. I like to you are a Literature Lover. "Poetic Artistry" is a write on literature of Poetry. Blessings
Date: 1/11/2018 3:39:00 PM
A belated welcome to the soup. This was a great way for you to start your time here.
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I am glad to be here and share. Blessings
Date: 8/6/2017 7:41:00 PM
Heavenly masterpiece! Wondrously compelling to read and enjoy! Bravo! Pandita
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/6/2017 7:50:00 PM
Yes, He is the Lord who did and does inspire me. Amen, blessings to all.
Date: 8/4/2017 7:41:00 PM
The prose certainly there your rhetoric lacking and your praise a little overwhelming. Patriotic with patronize.
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:25:00 PM
A view to a view. Also, please, make sure to also visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net, net as in a fisherman,s men net. And the book, Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. Be blessed
Date: 8/4/2017 10:16:00 AM
Love it.. Wonderful and clear descriptions.. Keep it up!!
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Vandke. I did try to reply to you earlier. Thank you for letting this poem bless you. Amen, Also, Please, make sure to also visit the website the Lord has given me, www.jesuschristvisitation.net and book, Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. Be blessed and God Bless. Amen
Date: 7/26/2017 4:55:00 PM
I enjoyed this descriptive, enthusiastic piece, Ronald! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 7/26/2017 5:31:00 PM
There is more with my published book: True Story Testimony: Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. http://www.christianfaithpublishing.com/books/?book=jesus-christ-the-messiah-visitation-true-story-testimony-with-inspired-nature-and-bible-poems. Also, there is my website www jesuschristvisitation net. Be even more blessed, Amen. Thanks, take care.
Date: 7/25/2017 2:10:00 AM
Beautiful Free Verse (that's what it is). I can see everything passing by in the night, like that very much. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Date: 6/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
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Date: 7/25/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, for giving that nice commenting on my Poem Heaven Celestial. There is more with my published book: True Story Testimony: Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation http://www.christianfaithpublishing.com/books/?book=jesus-christ-the-messiah-visitation-true-story-testimony-with-inspired-nature-and-bible-poems. Thanks
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