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Free Verse. My most original Star Diamond phrased used, the first of its kind. First version written more then 25 years ago.  When thoughts of my diamond ring and astronomy over the virgin internet like netscape and looking at the new hubble space telescope pics. A developed write. Final edit update 12/20/2020

Heaven Celestial

            Beaming brilliant beautiful bright stars.
            These diamonds, twinkling, sparkling. 
            Diamonds hung in the black velvet night.
            They shinning like diamond crystal lights.

            The Sun’s radiant light.
            A heavenly hot heavy circular sphere. 
            Our planetary system is orbiting it.
            
            Icy comets are extending their tail and rolling by.
            Rocky asteroids, saying hi and good-bye.
            Meteorites, streaking, passing in the day and night skies.

            Multicolor are the cloudy nebulae.
            These are Orion, Helix, Crab, Eagle and Ring.
            Horsehead, Owl, Tarantula and Omega.
            All having stunning stars in them. 

            Galaxies with different shapes: some are Spirals.
            Some Galaxies shapes are called a Bar-Spiral.
            Galaxies shapes that are Elliptical.
            Galaxies shapes that are most Irregular.

            Galaxies names like: Milky Way - looking milky, 
            Whirlpool is whirly, Tadpole looks like a tadpole,
            The Sombrero - looking like a Sombrero, 
            The Crown of Thorns - looks like a crown of thorns,
            The Cartwheel, that cartwheels, 
            Andromeda, Messier 87 and Sunflower, etc.
             
            An over estimated 200 billion and more galaxies. 
            A Super Massive Black Hole are in most of their middle.  
            Over time there are big bangs, of Super-Novas exploding.
            A Quasar, brightest of all the Cosmos lights.
            The Universe filled with stars with colors of all various types.              

             An over estimated 200 billion and more galaxies. 
             A Super Massive Black Hole are in most of their middle. 
             Over time there are big bangs, of Super-Novas exploding.
             A Quasar, brightest of all the Cosmos lights.
             The Universe filled with stars with colors of all various types. 
             A panorama, full of spectacular, splendid visual sites.  
             A God made amazing showcase theater thriller, block buster.
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Rv Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Wow, what a beautiful write.. this is magnificent! It reminds me of Doctor Who, your descriptions, and I so love your ending :)
Williams Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 9:30 PM
View again updated, now rated a 8.2 on Allpoetry. Amen, Blessings
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:02 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Thank you RV for your nice comments. Heaven and Nature are and can be beautiful indeed. I like to you are a Literature Lover. "Poetic Artistry" is a write on literature of Poetry. Blessings
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January 11, 2018 at 3:39 PM
A belated welcome to the soup. This was a great way for you to start your time here.
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:02 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thanks Richard, I am glad to be here and share. Blessings
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August 6, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Heavenly masterpiece! Wondrously compelling to read and enjoy! Bravo! Pandita
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:02 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Yes, He is the Lord who did and does inspire me. Amen, blessings to all.
Jenkins Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 7:41 PM
The prose certainly there your rhetoric lacking and your praise a little overwhelming. Patriotic with patronize.
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:02 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:25 PM
A view to a view. Also, please, make sure to also visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net, net as in a fisherman,s men net. And the book, Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. Be blessed
Buckner Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Love it.. Wonderful and clear descriptions.. Keep it up!!
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:01 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Thank you Vandke. I did try to reply to you earlier. Thank you for letting this poem bless you. Amen, Also, Please, make sure to also visit the website the Lord has given me, www.jesuschristvisitation.net and book, Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. Be blessed and God Bless. Amen
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July 26, 2017 at 4:55 PM
I enjoyed this descriptive, enthusiastic piece, Ronald! Congrats on your win. Janice
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:01 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:31 PM
There is more with my published book: True Story Testimony: Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems. http://www.christianfaithpublishing.com/books/?book=jesus-christ-the-messiah-visitation-true-story-testimony-with-inspired-nature-and-bible-poems. Also, there is my website www jesuschristvisitation net. Be even more blessed, Amen. Thanks, take care.
White Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Beautiful Free Verse (that's what it is). I can see everything passing by in the night, like that very much. Welcome to PoetrySoup
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:01 PM
View my now rated at 7.7, Heaven Celestial upgraded. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Just touch up and updated Heaven Celestial. Perfect, Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, for giving that nice commenting on my Poem Heaven Celestial. There is more with my published book: True Story Testimony: Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation http://www.christianfaithpublishing.com/books/?book=jesus-christ-the-messiah-visitation-true-story-testimony-with-inspired-nature-and-bible-poems. Thanks
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