Heaven

Heaven A place where you and I will live example of love we will share n give Where no disdain but love shall thrive To remain so we will strive A place where miles away will be hell We will live in a cell Guarded well No hatred will dwell For coming generations we will be an example Of love n love alone a sample Where love shall be ample No trespasser shall trample.

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/3/2017 9:10:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2017 3:25:00 PM

Yes, Bawa. that would be heaven! Congrats for your win.

Bawa Talwar
Date: 12/4/2017 9:02:00 PM

Thank you Andrea I'm so glad you liked it .

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/3/2017 6:54:00 AM

This is a great description, Bawa:) congratulations:)

Bawa Talwar
Date: 12/4/2017 9:01:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciation !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2017 12:54:00 PM

A heavenly treat. Congrats on your win.

Alley Mcintosh

Date: 11/16/2017 6:27:00 AM

Hey Bawa, I really enjoyed the poem. One of my favorite lines was "To remain so we will strive", as well as the couple line "A place where miles away will be hell" I found that they both spoke to me. I hope you find something else beautiful to write about today.

Bawa Talwar
Date: 11/16/2017 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Alley for your encouragement. I hope too that someday I shall write the best one so far.