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Heaven?

I awaken to the sounds of the cries of my soul. I bury myself beneath the avalanche of torture and hurt. I retreat to my palace of praise and worship. I examine my thoughts, only to find them filled with your passion for destruction. Deceiving my perspective and insight. You have abandoned your responsibilty and uty. You have failed as a mentor, you have destroyed what could be. You have forgotten me..

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Date: 1/27/2025 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 12/11/2018 4:23:00 AM
Very unique Jeanne please share some more I enjoyed this poem. ~ phatt matt
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:18:00 PM
JEANNE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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