Heaven

HEAVEN 


No white sheets or flowers;  but a renewed host of the weary and old, 
The hungry, the crippled, the crying,  the sick now standing  in health.
Ladies no longer huddled in the  rain selling flowers on the street cold;
The despised, scorned, mocked  -  no longer pushed out by lack of wealth.


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Entered in Carolyn Devonshire’s  Contest     Perceptions of Heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 7:21 AM
I love how you focused on the sick and weary being made good again. awesome poem and win!
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 3:44 AM
Hi Sid....great perceptions on heaven...your point of view is shared!,,congrats on this win, friend! :) GWendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 7:33 PM
congrats Sidney on a wonderful write and win .. lovely lines on the great beyond...
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Great thoughts about heaven..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats.Sara
Grisetti Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 4:35 PM
I like the image of everyone included in heaven - congratulations
Guzzi Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 3:37 PM
There's my Sid giving them the harsh realities of Earth buff polished in heaven! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love
Beck Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:34 AM
thanks, but yours was way, way better Debs ....... congratulations for a well structured meaningful verse....best wishes...Syd
Johnson Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Beautiful idea of Heaven. Congratulations Sidney
Taylor Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Congrats on your win, Sid. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Sidney, I wish we could eliminate hunger, poverty and prejudice in our world today, but heaven will be the great equalizer. Exceptional write. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Beck Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Thanks Carolyn for the generous placing in your contest.....I'm afraid all my "inspirational" type poems always seem t o come back to the poor and sick etc....sometimes wish I could write more jolly brighter stuff ...oh well thats me I guess hahaha.......havent heard fro m yo u for ages....... how are you doing? keep in touch please
Venkataraman Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Really giving hope to mind, What a joy it will be! I am impressed by your ideas, I am sure it is the truth.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Smile....like it Sidney.....in heaven.... - oxox Anne-Lise
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