Heaven

Light
shines down
over me
grabs my spirit
taking my soul to the afterlife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 18, 2009 at 2:21 PM
What an uplifting view in this one. Blessings to you for sharing it. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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July 17, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Delightfully said Jared>>James
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July 14, 2009 at 3:39 PM
Great writing. Sara
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July 12, 2009 at 3:54 PM
A warm light it must be, nice write...Raul
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