Heaven

ITS A PLACE WE CAN SEE ALL ALONE YOU AND ME
ITS LIKE A STAR UP ABOVE FLYING HIGH LIKE A DOVE
ITS A PLACE WHERE WE CAN BE PLACED WITH NO TRACE
THE PLACE WHERE WE WILL BE LOVED FLYING LIKE A DOVE
WILL BE CALLED HEAVEN ABOVE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 7, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Holly J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv ""Skat""
Freeman Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Good flow and rhyme, Holly. Welcome to soup. Love, Moses
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July 4, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem about Heaven. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
Yates Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Very beautiful and peaceful... I am new as well I would really appreciate if you would tell me what you think.
Bailey Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 4:20 PM
You can feel the freedom, and peace within your words. Nice write and I look forward to reading more!!!
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July 1, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Lovely poem Holly, a warm welcome to the soup>>James
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July 1, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Holly. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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