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Heaven

ITS A PLACE WE CAN SEE ALL ALONE YOU AND ME ITS LIKE A STAR UP ABOVE FLYING HIGH LIKE A DOVE ITS A PLACE WHERE WE CAN BE PLACED WITH NO TRACE THE PLACE WHERE WE WILL BE LOVED FLYING LIKE A DOVE WILL BE CALLED HEAVEN ABOVE

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Date: 7/7/2016 2:50:00 AM
Holly J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv ""Skat""
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:35:00 PM
Good flow and rhyme, Holly. Welcome to soup. Love, Moses
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Date: 7/4/2009 12:25:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem about Heaven. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/1/2009 7:00:00 PM
Very beautiful and peaceful... I am new as well I would really appreciate if you would tell me what you think.
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Date: 7/1/2009 4:20:00 PM
You can feel the freedom, and peace within your words. Nice write and I look forward to reading more!!!
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Date: 7/1/2009 3:01:00 PM
Lovely poem Holly, a warm welcome to the soup>>James
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Date: 7/1/2009 12:24:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Holly. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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