Heaven

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Subtle, tingling, blissful caress
Wholeness of being, free from stress
Essence of presence celebrates 
Each node within, Cupid’s address

Magnetic heat, pheromones grates
To music of spheres, soul gyrates
Bliss elixir suffuses form
Soma nectar drips through love’s straits

Mists divine are both cool and warm
Magical is, this benign storm
The false drops away, truth is known
Rapture unbound, is the new norm

Bliss and wisdom, that’s ours to own
Borne of love and light, is home grown
Within our heart, is God’s heaven
Yet each must enter there alone 

05-September-2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/20/2022 9:35:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win with this stellar poem of images and light! Your word pictures are so inventive, fresh and so inspiring. So happy to see this on the winners list where it can stand out and receive the attention it deserves. Your words carried me away to a heavenly place of inspiration. Thank you! :)' Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2022 6:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sam and for the fav too!
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Date: 9/20/2022 9:36:00 AM
Just faved it!
Date: 9/10/2022 7:29:00 AM
Way to go with this faith-based winner. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this winner. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:22:00 AM
Happy you enjoyed, Sara, thank you!
Date: 9/10/2022 6:48:00 AM
Seeker, wonderful Rubaiyt poem, I love it, and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _peace and tranquility ~
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 9/9/2022 9:31:00 PM
Great concept of heaven. Simple, yet, no so easy to achieve. "each must enter there alone" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2022 3:46:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 9/9/2022 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I love your last stanza, “Bliss and wisdom etc. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/9/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 9/4/2022 11:40:00 PM
Love this Poetry from you on Heaven my friend. Blessings to you for it...
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Michael, so delighted you enjoyed
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