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Heaven - Dizzain Me

People dream of their own heaven
Where happiness dwells and time suspends
No more tears or life barren
Where difference always mends
With nature so calm and beauty surrounds.

In this remote terrain of dreary sand
Distanced from my dream at hand 
I dwell in the nostalgic past and moan!
Alas! how can I make you understand
The heaven that is my motherland grown!!!

© Nadiya (20 Jan '15)

*Won 3rd place on 4 Feb 2015 in the contest 'Dizzain Me' by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Skat A Date: 2/15/2015 10:40:00 AM Poesy~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE* Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/15/2015 12:12:00 PM Thank you very much dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/6/2015 10:54:00 PM Congratulations. I enjoyed reading YOUR thoughts on heaven. Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/7/2015 12:00:00 AM Dear Andrea ... thank you very much for your lovely words on my poems... nad!

Sandra Haight Date: 2/3/2015 3:12:00 PM Yes, Nadiya...heaven is where your heart is for sure. Congratulations on your fine win for your beautifully-written Dizain! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 3:28:00 PM Thank you very much Sandra for your nice words... lov, nad!

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/3/2015 12:07:00 PM heavenly memories in the nostalgic past. congrats Nads. Mohan Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 12:37:00 PM Thank you Mohan..

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/3/2015 12:07:00 PM heavenly memories in the nostalgic past. congrats Nads. Mohan Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 2/3/2015 10:50:00 AM Hi Nad! Great job. Great win. Congratulations. It was enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 11:27:00 AM Thank you Earl... pleased that you enjoyed the read... have a nice day... nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/3/2015 7:41:00 AM Congrats Nad on win. God bless. Love)))))rajat Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 8:27:00 AM Thank you very much friend... nad!

Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2015 6:42:00 AM Such a beautiful write - many congrats Nadiya:-) hugs Jan x Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 6:54:00 AM Thank yoy Jan.. its a pleasure to see your comments on my poems

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/3/2015 5:29:00 AM Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Nadiya Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/3/2015 6:54:00 AM Thank you Dr. Ram for this contest

Skat A Date: 1/24/2015 11:23:00 PM This is one breathtaking poem, Nadiya. I'm thinking I love this place called heaven. Love SKAT Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/25/2015 6:04:00 AM We all do dear friend... thank you once again.lov nad!

Arlene Smith Date: 1/22/2015 1:04:00 PM Beautiful, dear friend!.. We all have our personal heavens.... Sure to be a winner... Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/22/2015 1:06:00 PM Thank you Arlene... pleased that u like my poem... lov,nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/21/2015 8:26:00 AM For me the winner what better heaven can be than motherland...Kudos.Love>Your friend Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/21/2015 12:53:00 PM Thank you Rajat... your comments are always encouraging... lov, nad!

Fariq Yusoff Date: 1/21/2015 4:37:00 AM I love your perspective on what heaven is. "Where difference always mends" - Simplistic Bliss. " Where happiness dwells and time suspends" - love this line. Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/21/2015 5:41:00 AM Thank you Fariq for your encouraging comment and the visit... it means a lot.. best wishes, nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 4:09:00 AM - Everyone has a picture of his own heaven ..... but who knows ...... I agree with Peter - A truly beautiful poem, Nadiya - I wish you luck in the contest, hoping you'll win - Have a lovely day my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/21/2015 5:39:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, may your idea of a heaven come true... hugs n lov, nad!