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HEAVEN-BOUND

With REVERENCE he approached the sacred ground ENCOMPASSED by a haughty sense of pride, Content in knowing he was heaven-bound, That certain PREDILICTION, not denied; CONSTERNATION showed at once, he could see CONDEMNATION from above, then APATHY; UNEARTHLINESS a practice he’d not tried. 10/31/2018

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Date: 11/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Hi Deb, you fit the words so effortlessly into this excellent little gem. A write that holds the reader from beginning to end. Such wonderful content in such a little jewel. If for a contest I wish you well with this wonderful write. have a wonderful Saturday Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. You've given me high praise here and I appreciate your words so much.
Date: 11/2/2018 6:47:00 AM
You fit those heavy words in such a brief poem..elegantly done..best for a win, Deb.
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Date: 11/5/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay. I appreciate your words. You are very kind and I always look forward to reading your comments.
Date: 11/1/2018 3:37:00 PM
Many of us probably hope that we will be secure in knowing we are "heaven bound" as we near the end of our days. This is quite a thought-provoking, yet brief verse. Well done! Your work stands well on its own, but if for a contest, I send winning wishes your way. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn. Your words warm my heart. I appreciate your support greatly.