Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Heather's Feather

There was once a hot dancer named Heather

   Who for her act wore just a huge feather

      She fumbled her prop one night

         And much to her fan's delight

            Fled from the stage in her altogether

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Michael Tor June 18, 2023 at 5:52 PM Lovely and funny Robert... Enjoyed reading my friend. Thank you for sharing... Robert L. Hinshaw June 19, 2023 at 6:30 AM Thank you, Michael, for stopping byl Best to you - Bob

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 9, 2023 at 3:56 AM Ha ha ha, love it xx Robert L. Hinshaw June 9, 2023 at 6:30 AM Thank you, Mandy - glad it gave you a laugh! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Panagiota Romios June 6, 2023 at 4:51 PM You have a tremendous sense of humor, Robert One feather indeed…..holy cow Pangie xx Robert L. Hinshaw June 7, 2023 at 6:24 AM Thank you, Pangie! I doubt that Heather found much humor in her situation! Bob H

Beryl Edmonds June 6, 2023 at 3:21 PM Heather decided to dance in leather - A bra and a thong that went together - But it got so hot - Her gear slipped right off - And the crowd raised the roof for fine weather…… Belle Beryl Edmonds June 6, 2023 at 5:12 PM Thank you Robert, I enjoy replying to fun Limericks like yours, somehow I find it easier than thinking up one of my own… Belle Robert L. Hinshaw June 6, 2023 at 4:47 PM Great one, Belle - you should copy that great comment ad post it on Soup! Thanks for taking time to read my nonsense - Bob H

Jan Allison June 6, 2023 at 2:44 PM hahaha Robert this is hilarious!!! wish I;d thought of it myself:-) hugs jan xx Robert L. Hinshaw June 6, 2023 at 2:50 PM Glad you got some ha-ha's from this bit of nonsense, Jan. Thanks for commenting - Bob H