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Heather

Reflected in emerald water
the purple of her Highland dress.

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Contest: Any Crystalline
Sponsor: Rick Parise
© 12th November 2016

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2017 at 3:03 PM

A captivating and enchanting write Paul with delicate and stunning imagery. Beautiful!

November 16, 2017 at 8:27 PM

Thank you for the compliment Paul, which puts a smile on my face. I think you, my friend, are a very gifted writer and I love reading your poetry.. Warmest wishes..

November 16, 2017 at 4:23 PM

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Susan. I look forward to your visits... gifted writers are always appreciated and made welcome. Regards // paul

December 6, 2016 at 4:49 PM

Lovely. With very few words you enabled me to see her standing upon a rocky hill surrounded by heather. Nicely done Paul. God Bless and a seven from me. JB

November 16, 2017 at 4:05 PM

Excuse this very belated reply, Judy...somehow this comment escaped my attention!! Thank you for reading and commenting. Blessings to you, too. // paul

November 26, 2016 at 11:24 AM

Divine. If only I could wiggle my nose and be in that dress by that emerald water. Oh, the image, the dream ... CayCay

November 26, 2016 at 3:11 PM

Thank you for divinely commenting, CayCay! You have been missed...hope all is well. Regards // paul

November 24, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Stunning imagery in so few words, vividly flecked! Congrats.

November 24, 2016 at 1:20 PM

Thank you so much, Paloma. "Stunning' is what I often think when reading your poems:) Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

November 22, 2016 at 12:48 AM

You are an amazing poet, Paul. I'm always entranced by your words, dear.

November 24, 2016 at 1:14 PM

You are too kind, Eileen! You know that I also admire your work a lot. Glad you enjoyed your Brazilian visit. Hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

November 20, 2016 at 6:30 PM

You penned this so great. Congratulations on your win.........A.M.

November 24, 2016 at 1:28 PM

So pleased you liked it, Afolabi....thank you. // paul

Abosede Ogundare

November 17, 2016 at 3:56 PM

Very lovely... and congrats.

November 18, 2016 at 3:27 PM

Thank you, Abosede. May you have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul

November 17, 2016 at 8:21 AM

Stunning beauty! Big congrats my dear friend, Paul! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

November 17, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Thank you dear Leonora! Your lovely comments are enough to make my day:) Hope you are keeping well. Hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

November 17, 2016 at 4:47 AM

As usually written beautifully my friend. Lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing it.

November 17, 2016 at 1:23 PM

Thank you for being always so encouraging, Ravi. Regards // paul

November 16, 2016 at 9:03 AM

Beautiful! Congrats, Paul!

November 16, 2016 at 1:51 PM

Pleased that you like it, Kim...thank you! Regards // paul

November 15, 2016 at 6:15 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs jan xx

November 16, 2016 at 1:44 PM

Thank you, Jan:) There were many good entries in this contest. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 15, 2016 at 11:55 AM

- A lovely poem, Paul - A winning poem - Congratulations, very well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

November 15, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) So pleased that you like it. Hugs // paul

November 15, 2016 at 9:10 AM

Lovely imagery, Paul, filled my mind as I read your words. Congratulations on your fine placement! Sandra

November 15, 2016 at 11:39 AM

Many thanks, Sandra. Pleased to see you on the winners' list, too. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

November 15, 2016 at 2:35 AM

This wonderful poem should be a winner for you Paul. Your poetry keeps getting better and better. I just love this piece! 7 ; )

November 15, 2016 at 11:40 AM

Thank you for the encouragement, Connie. Your high rating and lovely comments are truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2016 at 8:44 PM

oh my, this is so sweet. I just love it, Paul. Big congrats to you.

November 15, 2016 at 11:37 AM

So pleased that you like it, Andrea. Thank you. This form is a pleasure to work with. Regards // paul

Carrie Richards

November 14, 2016 at 8:29 PM

One can picture the loveliness of her image in the water !! Nicely done, Paul !!

November 15, 2016 at 11:35 AM

Thank you, Carrie! Congrats on your shining trophy:) Regards // paul

November 14, 2016 at 10:04 AM

#7

November 15, 2016 at 11:33 AM

the top rating is appreciated :)

November 14, 2016 at 10:04 AM

What a stunning image this creates Paul - very well done (a 7) , good luck in the contest too, warm regards, Laura.

November 15, 2016 at 11:33 AM

Thank you for liking, Laura; as a bonnie girl from Scotland this would have been of interest to you:) Warm regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

November 13, 2016 at 4:01 PM

So Beautiful Paul

November 15, 2016 at 11:17 AM

Pleased you like it Charm; I enjoyed your winning entry, too. Regards // paul

November 13, 2016 at 1:51 AM

Super little write, Paul, aall that imagery in two lines. Will do well. Regards, Viv

November 13, 2016 at 12:33 PM

Your faith in this short poem combined with superb comments make yours a pleasant visit, Viv! Regards // paul

Rizwana Bhurani

November 12, 2016 at 7:44 PM

Lovely....gl

November 13, 2016 at 12:15 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Rizwana. Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 12, 2016 at 2:04 PM

Very expressive poem, Paul. The spareness of words added weight to the ones used. Exceptional degree of specificity. The mark of a master poet. Great write and title. Love and peace to you.

November 12, 2016 at 4:13 PM

You, too, offer meaningful feedback and encouragement, Freddie; thank you!! Regards // paul

November 12, 2016 at 10:36 AM

Great work with so few words. Stunning.

November 12, 2016 at 4:11 PM

Thank you, Armand; you always stop by with positive, encouraging words. Regards // paul

November 11, 2016 at 10:47 PM

Beautiful Paul...

November 12, 2016 at 9:57 AM

Thank you Charlie. Regards // paul

November 11, 2016 at 9:29 PM

Paul - this is the best poem I have read in a long time - fabulous!

November 12, 2016 at 9:56 AM

Coming from you that means a lot, David...thank you! Regards // paul

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