Mario Vitale Poet Free verse

Heather

Beautiful sunset in swift apparel

She smiles in the wind having gold in hair
Pillars of cement line her inner voiced mind
Heather
Her stregnth comes in her immeasurable face

Love of a touch from another

Skipping rocks & such 
In the stream of captivating habitation
Heather
In circles commonly havoc from the distrust in others

She sings a lovely song as she tail skirts along
Timeless matter captivated by her hair in feathers
A crush through a blow in sorted venue plight
A song sheltered toward its beckoning call

The critics to her our all torn & battered
Her lips sag & smile is shattered
Her life as she knows take on the tremendous blows
With a timeless song in her heart

A rose petal in delicate sway
A happy smile to brighten anyone's day
A pull at her heart to light the spark to what it was she has been waiting for
Heather

Love in the eyes of the beholder

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Robert Pettit January 25, 2012 at 7:04 PM I had to check this one out because I just submitted a poem with the same title. Good descriptiveness here. Just correct two small spelling errors near the beginning: In your first line, "carassed" is correctly spelled "caressed". In your second line, "smile" should be spelled "smiles" for correct grammar purposes. Also, always spell out the conjunction "and" and never replace it with "&". Everything else looks presentable.