Heated Chandelier

Chandelier drips through glossy frames
Its  layer of  tint sets a room ablaze;
And then, while glances are exchanged
Soft the passion heating warmth’s pace.

Two shadows lock in blind desire, when
Chandelier drips through glossy frames
Mouths consume a thirst unrestrained
As drops of steam reflect on panes.

The evening raw defies hours’ refrain
Surrendering to lust that throbs, as
Chandelier drips through glossy frames
Until one hue blends flesh and glass.

Sips of wine taste an afterglow
While ceiling lamp quivers to tame
Love’s whispered moans now ebbing, lo;
Chandelier drips through glossy frames.



Jajosh Ongado for nette onclaud's Metaphor: Crystal
9 March 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gasun Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 10:10 AM
My hearty congratulations on your sparkling write and great win dear friend Jajosh. TYSM as well for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Jajosh :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, jajosh
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:53 PM
A lovely winning poem,Jajosh, ....SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 2:07 PM
unique take on the theme, jajosh.. now i see a chandelier as glossed passion.. warm congrats on your great win in my challenge!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 1:11 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem, Jajosh ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 18, 2014 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on the win Jajosh! Verlena
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