Heated and Warm

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HEATED AND WARM The lovely curve of your back An S of strong Steadfast Slender Surrender myself to you To your inviting arms That hold no curve But instead curl around me like a tender snake And your legs That carry the world and me Two pillars of folding themselves around our joining protective Your mouth compasionate circle around my ear Whispering those words only I can hear heated and warm *** Poem by Darren White December 17, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2016 9:02:00 PM

A sensual write, Darren. Great job!

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, and yeah I hoped people would read it as sensual as I intended.

Space Cadet

Date: 12/17/2016 7:50:00 PM

"Darren"! The flow of the entire poem, and the lines: "Two pillars of folding/ themselves around/ our joining/ protective..." !!! Beautiful, alluring. ....This is one of my favorites of your many great pieces.. -- Wesley C.

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:46:00 PM

Thanks Wesley. I happen to like that part you quote a lot indeed. Happy you see it as a favourite :)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 12/17/2016 3:26:00 PM

This poem is sensual and I loved how you wrote it! amazing one, Darren :* <3

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:45:00 PM

Isn't it ;) I love this little poem too <3

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/17/2016 6:19:00 AM

Very beautifully expressed, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Rebecca :)