"heat and Love"

The match is lit , the flame is high...
Lets grab this moment before it goes by...
The heat is sweltering under our blanket of love..
My heart is melting with you as my glove...
Drip slowly as our bodies pour into one...
Take our time as only we know when we are done...
Ice cubes ride our curves and disappear in the heat...
Your a tasty fruit of love that has me at your feet...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Steamy and sensual, Michael. Now you and Wilma (who posted a passionate write today) will have to foot the bill for my cold shower. Great work! The ice cubes wouldn't last one minute on my skin after reading your poem. Blazing Hot! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 12:14 AM
LIke LInda says here, A steamy write, for sure!! Go cool off in that ocean! LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:01 PM
WoW ..now I AM headed for the ocean.. this is steamy and sexy with class.. well written my friend.. u certainly know about passion mixed with true luv.. its truly amazing.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...we eat passion fruit here u know.. hint hint.. u can tell whats been going on ..haha
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Great passionate write...Your love should enjoy this one..Keep the passionate and romantic pen flowing...Sara
Fraser Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Michael, this poem just flows of the tongue just as honey would do. It's simply a delight to read. Thank you for your always kind comments on my poems > have a wonderful weekend >> James
Gelb Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Thank you. On your poem.((((((((((((Warm))))))))))))) I'm sweating. How do you guys think up all these poems?
Neels Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:30 AM
I enjoyed this one, love the different ways you bring passion to the fore in your pieces, soupmail bb Wilma
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