Heat

Hot. . . white hot Sahara sand am I.
Turning, ever turning, how I burn
white. . . hot white beneath the desert sky.
In search of sweet relief, for you I yearn,
shifting, ever shifting, I’m a dune.
Each particle of me is filled with heat.
I roll beneath the sun of afternoon,
ever passion parched though time be fleet.
I’m drifting to the brink of mad desire.
Cool. . . blue cool, sweet pool that I pursue-
mirages that appear quench not my fire.
Blue. . . cool blue, my remedy is you.
I’m half a continent; my love is vast.
Reveal yourself, Oasis, at long last!


Submitted for "Fanning the Embers"
sponsored by: Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/14/2020 8:28:00 PM
I knew I had read this one before, but didn't see a comment. Searched and found this is 'Desert Love' renamed. One of my top ten favorites of all your sonnets! Simply amazing.
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Date: 3/29/2012 12:03:00 PM
I'm feeling hot just reading this one, Andrea! I'll have to have a cold beer, LOL. Very vivid descriptions
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Date: 10/10/2010 9:51:00 AM
I really liked your first three lines, Andrea. Well, actually, the whole poem is really beautiful. Thank you for my HM in the contest.:) Hugs, Emilia(LL)
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:25:00 AM
Well Andrea u had me fooled.. thought this was going in a different direction.. than the Oasis but its so well written I could not stop reading and reading again.. missed this one on one of my bad achy days this week luv.. good luck in contest..
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:19:00 PM
Reminds me of the song "Midnight at the Oasis" by Maria Muldaeur. Happy Birthday! Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:04:00 AM
Hmmm I think I might have to check out a few of the comps again ... loved this one it reminds me of an old one of mine I dont think its posted here ... lovely work .. good luck in the competition love Jayne
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:10:00 PM
a cool dune, this is sexy Andrea, a wonderful poem. good luck in contest. Harry
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:18:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Andrea. The best to you in catie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:03:00 PM
Well written, hot poem!!
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:24:00 PM
Very hottie heat,penned sensually,very classic and beautiful,tmfvs!How are you?Nice night dear Andrea.
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Date: 10/3/2010 11:19:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. I love the way this is written Andrea. Phyl
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:42:00 AM
Original concept and awesomely done Andrea. I absolutely love your Sonnet, good luck for Catie's contest with this scorcher :) love Wilma
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:18:00 AM
whew! need a cold shower after that one, great job, good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:08:00 AM
my brother was in uma arz and the storys he told me about the desert was not nice and made me glad I was in Minnesota enjoying the cool weather great entry for contest my friend can see this in winners circle also thanks a ton for your kind comments on my poems keep up the wonderful writing
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:03:00 AM
I have been in some desers (Negev and Atacama) and can imagine what the Sahara would like! Lovely images and write, Andrea!....Have a great week and thank you for your kind comments!...Gert
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:35:00 AM
"Raskin Bobbins?" Tell him he ought to read Molly Wart. He he he h he. Old Dave
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:31:00 AM
From the scorching white of the Sahara to the "sweet pool" of the Blue Lagoon. You be HOT! And you be COOL. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:10:00 AM
A true passionate amd tender heated write...Love this Andrea....love Michael
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
Very passionate write with nice personification of HEAT. A dune, evershifting.. nice, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:46:00 AM
oo, such an original take on Catie's contest. I love it. 'shifting, ever shifting, I'm a dune' - superb line, I can picture those grains of sand constantly moving. It's intense and of course in superb sonnet form. Best wishes in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:25:00 AM
enjoyed reading your embers in the oasis!
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:22:00 AM
Very demure passionate write..I enjoyed your hot and cool desire..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work.. Sara
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:34:00 AM
very sultry and sensual...love it Andrea best of luck in the contest Take care~Deb
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