Heartspeak

New Orleans steam rise
hearts collide unexpectedly

one Belle rings true

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Charmaine Chircop

September 2, 2023 at 4:54 PM

Nice play with words.. There's always one Belle for the Beast,and One Beast who happened to be a Prince for Belle.. That's the spell. Love it.

Charmaine Chircop

September 5, 2023 at 2:27 PM

And Spells are meant to be magical too..Where there is the magic of willingness anything can be fixed.

Arlo Parker

September 3, 2023 at 9:50 PM

Spells are meant to be broken, M'Lady. ;o]]

I Am Anaya

April 30, 2023 at 9:04 PM

Is that steamed rice, Lol sounds oriental for a minute! where's the lotus flower lots of love to you Arlo

I Am Anaya

April 30, 2023 at 10:40 PM

Did you get a free trip to New Orleans or something? Hot huh? Score!

Arlo Parker

April 30, 2023 at 10:23 PM

Thanks Anaya. Steam rise as in hot! hot! hot!. That sizzling undercurrent is intoxicating. Maybe rice wine (sake)...? =:0))

Brandy Nicole

April 29, 2023 at 4:43 PM

"one Belle rings true." That's good to know, Arlo. :) Hugs, Brandy

Brandy Nicole

April 29, 2023 at 5:58 PM

: ) You're right about that.

Arlo Parker

April 29, 2023 at 5:46 PM

Southern Belles have their own music... ~;o)

Daniel Turner

April 28, 2023 at 10:59 AM

One must be careful when firing shots in the air that they don't come down on the shooter, AP.

Arlo Parker

April 28, 2023 at 2:38 PM

Good advice.

Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2023 at 4:51 PM

cute word play with belle

Arlo Parker

April 27, 2023 at 8:04 PM

Thank you, AD. High praise comin' from you. Congrats on POTD, btw. ~;o

Sam Kauffman

April 27, 2023 at 9:25 AM

Arlo, you have said so much in seventeen syllables. I can see the mist from the river and hear the bells in the city! So nicely written. Blessings.

Arlo Parker

April 27, 2023 at 11:26 AM

So appreciated, Sam. Lovely comments. ~:o)

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